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| "Snow Angels" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: Tiffy On: January 17, 2009 19:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I remember you telling me you were doing this. I really liked it. It was insane. And sad. But really, VERY good. I love how she has no clue what she's doing. Especially since, I'm guessing, she's never made a snow angel before. :] It made me giggle when she was 'happy'(that's totally not the right word, but you know what I mean) that Mike didn't follow her. I didn't understand really when she was wincing. Was it just reminding her of Edward, which is my first assumption, or is it his voice telling her to be careful?
| Reviewed By: HARDrichard [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2009 00:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was really zombie-like. This story really shows how depressing and nihilistic she felt. There's nothing bad to say in my opinion since I know what you were going for. Good job ^_^ oh, well there is one thing. It would've been cooler if you could write what made her so depressed like a heart wrenching story to go with it, and THEN how she felt afterwards.
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