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| "The Supply Closet" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Title: Hot stuff
Reviewed By: zantaz [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2009 05:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nothing like a Kaname and Sousuke romp. Would be interesting to see where else and what else the couple would do, in getting it on. Would like to see a bit more background to each scenario though. And what if one of the girls make a move on Sousuke (like their home room teacher, Mizuki, etc.)? That's gotta heat up some. Cool lemon and hot stuff. Looking forward to more like this.
| Reviewed By: Kagome_Loves_Pie On: February 14, 2009 17:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol been their and done that overall very good job
| Reviewed By: tayuflame On: January 04, 2009 21:27 CST
Comment/Review:
I liked it very well written overall good job. =)
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