| "Metamorphosis: Genesis" Reviews/Comments [ 24 ] |
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Reviewed By: Susan3490 On: March 22, 2010 12:58 EDT
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Kaya was so kick ass it was awesome, I loved her with the thugs. I agree with Tiaq I want to know more about Chris.
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Reviewed By: Autumn8009 On: March 19, 2010 03:31 EDT
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Is disappointed by the lack of Sano in this chapter. He makes me laugh, but it was kinda cool seeing Kaya by herself. Though my favorite characters have to be Lyrial and Sano. Those two are so funny together. They're gonna be together right?
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Reviewed By: Tiaq On: March 10, 2010 02:10 EST
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Yay more! I liked this new chapter & agree with VanillaFrosting it never feels like enough when you update. I always read through it so fast, excited to see what happens next. Ah the curses of finding a good story. But I want to know more about this Chris person! And about this Alex guy too! Can't wait to read more! More arts for you for more chapters!
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Title: Update soon!
Reviewed By: VanillaFrosting [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2010 01:44 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Gah! It never feels like enough when you update, you should write more, or faster. The story is so interesting and I really want to know what is happening, even when you don't end in a cliff-hanger it feels as if you do. I liked seeing the hint of normalcy in Lyrial's life; the girl needs some relaxation in her life!And that Chris guy seems so sweet, I hope they can be happy together. I was sad by the lack of Sano in the chapter, but I thought it was cool to see Kaya be a Witch. But why does magick tire her out so much? Is that normal? Even if she does say she hasn't used magick very much lately, shouldn't she be able to handle it? Hopefully you'll update soon, because I wand my questions answered. Damnit!
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Reviewed By: Tiaq On: February 18, 2010 02:43 EST
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Excuse me while I flail and laugh. I want mooooore! Nooow! This is seriously such a good read. It's been so long since I've read something that has actually made me giggle out loud. Let alone laugh. I keep alternating between wanting to smack Sano, and feel sorry for him. Love all the character development that's going on, not only with Sano but Kaya and Lyrial. I'll definitely be keeping an eye out for new updates soon. *hint!*
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Reviewed By: brownsugar [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2010 18:48 EST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You should just spend the next few months finishing this because waiting for just ONE chapter at a time is painful. [haha] Seriously cannot wait until the next one is posted up. I think Lyrial is going to drive Kaya and Sano crazy because they both probably going to fall for her.
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Title: LoriTini
Reviewed By: Century [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2010 04:32 EST
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I hope you update soon! I want to know what happens next! How is Christian alive? I thought he died a couple chapters back!
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Reviewed By: brownsugar [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2010 17:53 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Can't wait for the next chapter. Amazing story so far :)
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Reviewed By: Ancient Spirit [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2010 03:27 EST
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Wonderful, as usual. I love it and can't possibly wait for the next one!
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Reviewed By: LoriTini On: December 13, 2009 23:55 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thought that this was a really well written story, and I can't wait for more. I think Lyrial and Sano make a cute couple, and I cannot wait to see how they get together. Please update soon, I'm waiting.
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Reviewed By: Susan3490 On: December 05, 2009 20:34 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love Sano, please post more, please
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Reviewed By: Ancient Spirit [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2009 20:02 EST
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Get the next chapter out. I'm getting impatient.
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Reviewed By: Ancient Spirit [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2009 00:09 EST
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I command thee to write more of this wonderful story. I'll get mad if you don't get the next chapter out soon.
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Reviewed By: Ancient Spirit [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2009 00:04 EDT
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I like this. Please write more. I will get angry and start pestering you! You now you have a good story when I start pestering you.
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Reviewed By: DemanFox [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2009 19:05 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
thats good I hope you write more soon I would like to know what happens next.
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