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Reviewed By: leeluu On: January 03, 2009 23:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You had to stop there!Why!Anyways,this was truly awesome.Are more chapters coming.It's like everyone wants more, myself included.
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Reviewed By: scherezade [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2009 23:36 CST
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What an intelligently written lemon! Your post apocalyptic background is inventive and yet Inu and Kag seem very true to character. I am usually not one to leave reviews, but your one shot deserves praise for its cleverness while serving up a healthy dose of hentai! Yummy!
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Reviewed By: crystal strawberry On: January 03, 2009 23:15 CST
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OKat that was hot. You have a talent for hentai thats for sure. I want more, pretty please.
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Reviewed By: lockedincar [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2009 23:12 CST
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Wonderful, I hope you decide to expand on it.
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Reviewed By: coykoi On: January 03, 2009 23:03 CST
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Would you consider doing a followup? This was so good, and I'm curious as to what Inuyasha would have done in the morning.
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Reviewed By: BlackMamba07 (nsi) On: January 03, 2009 22:32 CST
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Excellent fic. You do a great job of developing an interesting, original premise and keeping the characters IC. This stands alone well, but I would love to see a continuation! I look forward to seeing what you write in the future.
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Reviewed By: Love _3o On: January 03, 2009 22:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love it
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Reviewed By: glasssea On: January 03, 2009 22:18 CST
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Damn!! That was great. That was such a detail oriented one-shot. Though I do wish you would have continued this. It's very rare to come across such a well written story.
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Title: Cactusflower
Reviewed By: Cactusflower [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2009 21:15 CST
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Even though it is a 1-shot I enjoyed it very much and would like to see more. This would be a great story if you decide to continue with it. If you do decide to make something of it I would really love to read it clear to the end. And that would be a very big if on you part. Whatever you decide to do is up to you, so keep writing whatever you like too.
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Reviewed By: Kawa-Misuterii [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2009 20:37 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
holy cow that was awsome! It really seems like the kind of story that could go on, but it's great to leave the reader wondering, too! Very imaginative, I absolutely love the post-apocalyptic setting, too. Good job!
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Reviewed By: nicc85 On: January 03, 2009 15:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like this. you should continue this make it more than a one shot. it feels like the beginning of an interesting story.
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