Reviewed By: Anria Lalumin [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2002 14:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You've picked an interesting couple, but you've certainly written it well. I have to admit Dorothy is not one of my favourite characters (where Duo is ^_^) but you got inside her head and gave an extremely good perceptive on what makes her tick. A very believable and enjoyable piece.
Recently I've been tending towards the 'alternate' pairings for Gundam Wing, and you've done nothing to discourage this line of thinking - even though I had never previously thought of the possibility of Duo and Dorothy as a couple, I have to say you've converted me. Kudos, and I want the next part!
Anria. |
