| "Shikon no Hiruiseki" Reviews/Comments [ 26 ] |
Title: thank you!!!
Reviewed By: vampitty [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2013 23:40 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
thank you for updating and please update soon again!!!! i love this story!!! ^.^ vampitty |
Reviewed By: west On: July 17, 2009 10:08 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Glad to see an update.... keep up the good work... ^_^
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Reviewed By: Kawaii-KeKe-Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2009 10:41 EDT
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Yay an update on my birthday! Loved this chappy, and can't wait to find out what happens next! Sorry to hear someone close to you passed away x
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Reviewed By: ponygirl2112 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2009 03:39 EDT
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Looking forward to more. Inuyasha's sword is Tessaiga if you want the original Japanese version or Tetsusaiga if you want the mistranslated & uncorrected VIZ version, Sango's boomerang is Hiraikotsu.
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Reviewed By: Ishellmay [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2009 19:49 EDT
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Really good. As I have nothing to do I would love to beta for you. Just send me an email if you're interested. :)
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Reviewed By: Kurai-kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2009 12:54 EDT
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Oh wow this is such a great story plz update when you can I am really looking forward to more of this story so update soo and WOW did hiei sense the jewel shard or did he see it this is really great so again update soon
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Reviewed By: ponygirl2112 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2009 19:20 EDT
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I really like this & am looking forward to the next chapter. About the spellings you had questions on; tetsaiga(sp?) Inuyasha's sword has 2 different spellings depending on if you want to use the original Japanese version; Tessaiga or the mistranslated & uncorrected US VIZ version of Tetsusaiga. Someone at VIZ mistranslated the swords' name & didn't catch it until either shortly before or shortly after it was printed & it was left that way. hiraikoutsu(sp?) - Hiraikotsu
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Reviewed By: ice vixen x On: April 12, 2009 23:05 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Glad to see another update. I saw some (sp?)'s so here they are ... Hiraikotsu and Tetsusaiga ... Also i love the way hiei will be slowly accepting of and by the group and part of the jewel collecting. i don't think i've read it done this way before. Wonder how inuyasha will react to Hiei not only holding, but also being able to find the jewel shard. Wonder if the jagan is a reason the jewel reacts to his emotions so easily. I love this story and the way your going about it. My only advice is the chapter length needs to be longer. I just set aside a few hours to write, throw on some inspirational music and let the images flow from my mind to the page. I set a 5 to 6 pg min for myself cause that only translates from word to internet pgs as 3 to 4 pgs. Well, best of luck and i hope to see more soon. Have fun... ^_~
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Reviewed By: Bloodcherry [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2009 19:39 EDT
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Oh yeah, I can defintely hear the sound of Hiei taking his hand out of the demon's inards... Bleh. XD I would have given a noncomical "Ew." short, simple, explains it all. *laughs* Anyway, great chapters... I'm feeling real sorry for Koenma, I hope the others don't shun him forever. He was just doing his job, after all. *grins* Keep up the great work! Ja ne, Bloodcherry
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Reviewed By: ice vixen x On: April 11, 2009 21:20 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
glad to see another chapter up. Poor todler. well, keep up the good work... ^_~
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Reviewed By: kathyo On: April 09, 2009 16:19 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
still can't acess chapter 6! please repost or are you posting this elsewhere?
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Reviewed By: ice vixen x On: April 07, 2009 17:18 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Keep up the great work. Hope to see more soon, but as a request, do you think you could make your chapters longer. i know i'm greedy, but i just want to read as much as i can. ttfn... ^_~
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Title: very cool
Reviewed By: ice vixen x On: April 07, 2009 16:43 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i only just read ch 4 but what a great idea puting hiei in a legend that inspired his attack... very very imaginative. kkep up the good work and i am back to reading now... ^_~
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Reviewed By: kathyo On: April 05, 2009 16:42 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
love this story. However, there is a problem with chapter 6. When I select next, or even select it from the pull down menu, I get directed back to the home page. Something is worng wiht either the site or the posting. please correct soonest!
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Reviewed By: LadyNorth76 On: March 30, 2009 19:24 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the new chapter. I like seeing updates for this fanfic.^^ Poor Kagome. Hopefully Hiei will see Kagome's misfortune. Update soon. Thanks.
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Reviewed By: my3rdeyes [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2009 13:44 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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yup..hope you up date soon.
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Reviewed By: smr3491 On: March 28, 2009 04:35 EDT
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awesome. that's basically what I got for ya. This is actually really intriguing and I can actually believe it. keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: LadyNorth76 On: March 24, 2009 02:58 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You hadn't updated in a while. I'm so glad you did. I can't wait to read more. You think you could make the chapters longer?^^ Thanks.
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Reviewed By: Laria [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2009 00:11 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Omg! You so have to update, like, immediately so I can find out what happens! XD
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Title: cool
Reviewed By: ayashi77 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2009 20:08 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is good keep going
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Reviewed By: ayashi77 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2009 20:07 EST
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rhis is going to be good keep going
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Reviewed By: ayashi77 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2009 20:07 EST
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This going to be good keep going
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Reviewed By: LadyNorth On: January 14, 2009 06:45 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
How will Kagome help heal Hiei? Will she be the only one he will really converse with? I can't wait to find out! Update soon. Thanks.
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Reviewed By: Kawaii-KeKe-Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2009 08:38 EST
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Hehe! I wonder how Hiei's going to react to that little bit of infomation!! Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: LadyNorth76 On: January 05, 2009 14:04 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is awesome!!! I hope your chapters are longer in the future though. Please update soon. I'll be keeping watch for your work. Thanks!
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Reviewed By: janomaru [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2009 10:46 EST
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i cant give you a rating yet not enough content but it was enough to pique my intrest i look forward to seeing how your story pans out
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