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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2009 13:07 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... nice that kagome is back with inuyasha again... good that inuyasha talked to shippo... now inuyasha has to talk to kagome about being mates and inu rules... what's next... update when you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2009 02:14 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... seems that inuyasha learned about his parents... glad that sesshoumaru & inuyasha are in good terms now... good that inuyasha & kagome are going to be mates... when will it happen?... what's next... update when you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: braindrain806 On: March 28, 2009 11:54 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story and I want to read it to the end, but... if you keep leaving cliffhangers I don't think I'm going to make it. The suspense is killing me lol. Can't wait till next chapter.
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Title: Betrayal
Reviewed By: Isabela On: February 28, 2009 06:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You know i like you're story and i want to know the end.The Love with Inuyasha and Kagome is strong and tha is the nice part when kagome return to inuyasha because she found tha wash all a big mistake.I want from you to update soon so i can learn the other parts of this story.
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Reviewed By: spazzymuseZJ [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2009 20:38 CST
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Wow! I am so confused, I feel like Inuyasha lol. So you know have me hooked on two of your stories, you better update!
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Title: ugh!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: pugglegirl22 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2009 17:37 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AHHHHHHHHHHHHH! NOOOOOOOOOOO NOT ANOTHER CLIFFIE YOU TRULY HATE ME DONT YOU WAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! OH AND I LOVE YOUR STORY!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2009 16:38 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
great update... glad that kagome & inuyasha finally confessed their feelings... and others are happy for them... nice that sesshoumaru is supportive of them both too... wonder what sesshoumaru will tell inuyasha... now inuyasha just has to ask kagome to be his mate... what's next... update when you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: BrokenAngel1219 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2009 17:43 CST
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i dunno if u meant 2 do it, but the end of that last chapter is a cliffhanger & there's no author note, so i was kinda confused there. otherwise, good story.
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Reviewed By: BrokenAngel1219 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2009 17:43 CST
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i dunno if u meant 2 do it, but the end of that last chapter is a cliffhanger & there's no author note, so i was kinda confused there. otherwise, good story.
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Reviewed By: spazzymuseZJ [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2009 14:46 CST
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great chapter as usual, but if i may, the forgiveness was really quick, I mean it was like I hate you then BAM we're friends again, really fast, but it works i guess. Either way I can't wait for more. :)
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2009 00:24 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... glad that things seem to be clear for what kagome overheard... interesting that sesshoumaru is acting quite nice toward inuyasha and the others... hope inuyasha & kagome reveal their true feelings... what's next... update when you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: Lunabell [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2009 23:58 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Veyr good chapter! As for fanfictions....I have wrote a couple that my sister begs me to put on Mediaminer but...there very long. The stories are finished but one is 140 chapters long It's called the truth beneath the rose. Lol! It's named after the song. And my sister fixed all the grammer and spelling problems. And I have one of my own stories about a black kitten that losses it mother. My grandmother loved that one. I love reading! It's one of my hobbies.
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Reviewed By: spazzymuseZJ [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2009 12:31 CST
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Oh my god! I was so confused, trying to figure out what kikyo had done to inuyasha to get him to say that but I get it now! I love that you've remembered that Naraku has that power, most authors forget that completely. Great job!
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Title: stop doing cliffies!
Reviewed By: pugglegirl22 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2009 19:23 CST
Comment/Review:
great story i totally love it!!!!!! but you need to stop doing cliffies there making me go crazy!!!!!! if you ask me it kinda sounds like sesshomaru loves Kagome is that true or are you enjoying making me suffer!! curse you!!!
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Reviewed By: Lunabell [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2009 16:06 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter! There is no reason for her to not believe sango and miroku.
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