| "Betrayal" Reviews/Comments [ 27 ] |
| Pages (2): [ « ‹ 1 2 ] |
Reviewed By: spazzymuseZJ [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2009 12:31 CST
Comment/Review:
Oh my god! I was so confused, trying to figure out what kikyo had done to inuyasha to get him to say that but I get it now! I love that you've remembered that Naraku has that power, most authors forget that completely. Great job!
|
Title: stop doing cliffies!
Reviewed By: pugglegirl22 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2009 19:23 CST
Comment/Review:
great story i totally love it!!!!!! but you need to stop doing cliffies there making me go crazy!!!!!! if you ask me it kinda sounds like sesshomaru loves Kagome is that true or are you enjoying making me suffer!! curse you!!!
|
Reviewed By: Lunabell [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2009 16:06 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter! There is no reason for her to not believe sango and miroku.
|
Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2009 11:38 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
great update... nice of sesshoumaru to protect kagome... glad that inuyasha & the others went to find her... seems that the truth is about to come out... is shippou with them too?... what is going on?... update when you can... please and thank you...
|
Reviewed By: kj pann On: January 14, 2009 04:02 CST
Comment/Review:
hey theyre. kjpanny here. thanx for your reviews. I'm gonna update real soon, i promise, and as one of you mentioned, little red i think, youre abspolutely right and i'll try to put mpore feelings into it. and lunabell your critisism is welcomed with an open heart!
|
Title: ummm...
Reviewed By: Little Red On: January 12, 2009 21:07 CST
Comment/Review:
i hate kikyo, and i love kagome sesshoumaru pairings, but you push the story to far to fast. you dont give us time to savor the saddness or anger. had i read your story years ago id have raved about how great it was, and so just as my ability to spot a fantastic story when i see one has grown, so will your ability to write. so just keep on writting, but remember. pace yourself, and maybe dont make the story so very OOC...
|
Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2009 13:43 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
interesting story... like it so far... hope it's an inuyasha/kagome pairing then... wonder what happens next... update when you can... please and thank you...
|
Reviewed By: Moonfiregoldeyes [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2009 13:37 CST
Comment/Review:
you realize that you updated the last chapter 2? I'm waiting for whatever happens next and then it's the same chapter! Sounds good so far.
|
Title: I'm still reading it. ^_^
Reviewed By: Lunabell [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2009 01:14 CST
Comment/Review:
Lol! Then it's a Inu/Kag? I don't like being harsh when making a review on any story. When I started reading you're fanfic...I was like "not ANOTHER awfull sessh/kag story." I hate kikyo?Inu pairing a lot. It's just....really gross. Yeah...I smell naraku too. And he stinks. Another thing try to make you're chapters a little longer.
|
Reviewed By: spazzymuseZJ [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2009 19:00 CST
Comment/Review:
Uh oh I smell Naraku trouble in the air! You seriously update fast! Keep it up :)
|
Reviewed By: spazzymuseZJ [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2009 08:44 CST
Comment/Review:
You update really quickly! (that's definitely not a bad thing lol) You know I had never thought of that as a reason Kagome and Inuyasha never told Sesshomaru where she was from, but it makes sense! Good job :)
|
Reviewed By: spazzymuseZJ [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2009 23:41 CST
Comment/Review:
Even though your chapters are short, something actually happens, I like that lol. I hate kikyo, so I hope w/e you do, something happens to her!
|
Title: Sorry for being harsh.
Reviewed By: Lunabell [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2009 23:39 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm sorry but...It's Same as a lot of other sessh/kag pairings...You shouldn't make inuyasha act so...crazy. Inyasha is WAY too out of character. He would never harm kagome. I like some kag/sessh fics. But only if they are original. I've read stories like this one about 100 times and it's getting really old. I knew what was going to happen just from the name of the fic. Inuyasha will try to kill kagome but sesshoumaru will kill him blah,blah,blah...>_>
|
Reviewed By: spazzymuseZJ [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2009 22:23 CST
Comment/Review:
Sounds like a good start to me, update soon :)
|
Reviewed By: Yami No Rei [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2009 16:11 CST
Comment/Review:
Um. I would like to notice you that your one-shot is not showing. Could you try to upload it once again. Thank you. ^^ YamiNoRei
|
| Pages (2): [ « ‹ 1 2 ] |
