| "Black Hearts" Reviews/Comments [ 33 ] |
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Reviewed By: AngelOfBlades [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2004 20:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dude, update now! please! please! please! you havent for almost 6 months! update! please!
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Reviewed By: jonny g On: October 04, 2003 08:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was fukin awesome. u should write it as if pan actually does go kill the androids
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Reviewed By: Devilstitan On: April 07, 2003 16:35 CDT
Comment/Review:
cant wait for your next chapter! your fanfic is the best i've ever read and i've read quite a few. keep up the good work |
Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2003 15:16 CDT
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Oh man, that was horrible! The baby, I mean. I don't doubt that Pan's lost the last shred of sanity she had. I hate to see what she's going to do now. Update soon. |
Reviewed By: devilstitan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2003 12:06 CST
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good chapter!cant wait for the next one hope you update soon |
Reviewed By: devilstitan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2003 19:26 CST
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well then, that was different from what i've read before. good job though, hope you update soon. |
Reviewed By: Arsronus On: March 19, 2003 04:31 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I started reading this back on FF.net, and first off, I must thank you for introducing me to MediaMiner ^_^
That being said, I must say I love it ^_^ Except for one tiny thing...I expected Vegeta and Pan to get together right from the beginning, but now it's looking less and less like it. It was out of the ordinary, and I was actually looking forward to when they admitted their feelings, so on and so forth (yeppers. I'm just a big softie deep down ^_^)
Actually, you deserve all 10/10 in your ratings, but I think that more and more lately I can't keep focused on anythi—ooh...doggie... ::laughs:: So don't think it was your fault I lost interest from time to time ^_^
Oh well. Keep it up and write chapters more often! I'll go insane if you don't! I can't wait to read more ^_^ |
Reviewed By: kureeji [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2003 09:26 CST
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Hey, Im liking this. You have wonderful descriptions, but I think your diolouge needs a little bit of polishing. A little less drama in how they talk and it will be very good. I like the concept of this fic, and now i am going to go read more. |
Reviewed By: devilstitan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2003 18:03 CST
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That was a good chapter. I hope you update soon. |
Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2003 08:11 CST
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Oh holy crap!! This is definitely NOT what I was expecting! I..I..can't think of any words. Update soon, damn it!! |
Reviewed By: Blue Glowstick On: March 01, 2003 19:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome fic...update! |
Reviewed By: devilstitan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2003 21:48 CST
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i enjoyed reading that even though i've read it before/hope you update soon. |
Reviewed By: devilstitan On: February 25, 2003 12:19 CST
Comment/Review:
good chapter.update soon |
Reviewed By: devilstitan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2003 21:47 CST
Comment/Review:
Hey i couldnt help but review for this. its jus so awesome. i cant wait for you to update!
-Devilstitan |
Reviewed By: ills [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2003 16:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
when are you going to update this |
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