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Title: Black Hearts
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2005 16:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapter?
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Title: Black Hearts
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer On: November 08, 2004 23:48 CST
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: lil miss crazy On: March 27, 2004 01:01 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oooooo! creepy and dark! but good! i think its absolutely great! i love it! plz continue! i'll be waiting!
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Reviewed By: AngelOfBlades [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2004 20:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dude, update now! please! please! please! you havent for almost 6 months! update! please!
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Title: cool
Reviewed By: jonny g On: October 04, 2003 08:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was fukin awesome. u should write it as if pan actually does go kill the androids
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Reviewed By: Devilstitan On: April 07, 2003 16:35 CDT
Comment/Review:
cant wait for your next chapter! your fanfic is the best i've ever read and i've read quite a few. keep up the good work |
Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2003 15:16 CDT
Comment/Review:
Oh man, that was horrible! The baby, I mean. I don't doubt that Pan's lost the last shred of sanity she had. I hate to see what she's going to do now. Update soon. |
Reviewed By: devilstitan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2003 12:06 CST
Comment/Review:
good chapter!cant wait for the next one hope you update soon |
Reviewed By: devilstitan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2003 19:26 CST
Comment/Review:
well then, that was different from what i've read before. good job though, hope you update soon. |
Reviewed By: Arsronus On: March 19, 2003 04:31 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I started reading this back on FF.net, and first off, I must thank you for introducing me to MediaMiner ^_^
That being said, I must say I love it ^_^ Except for one tiny thing...I expected Vegeta and Pan to get together right from the beginning, but now it's looking less and less like it. It was out of the ordinary, and I was actually looking forward to when they admitted their feelings, so on and so forth (yeppers. I'm just a big softie deep down ^_^)
Actually, you deserve all 10/10 in your ratings, but I think that more and more lately I can't keep focused on anythi—ooh...doggie... ::laughs:: So don't think it was your fault I lost interest from time to time ^_^
Oh well. Keep it up and write chapters more often! I'll go insane if you don't! I can't wait to read more ^_^ |
Reviewed By: kureeji [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2003 09:26 CST
Comment/Review:
Hey, Im liking this. You have wonderful descriptions, but I think your diolouge needs a little bit of polishing. A little less drama in how they talk and it will be very good. I like the concept of this fic, and now i am going to go read more. |
Reviewed By: devilstitan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2003 18:03 CST
Comment/Review:
That was a good chapter. I hope you update soon. |
Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2003 08:11 CST
Comment/Review:
Oh holy crap!! This is definitely NOT what I was expecting! I..I..can't think of any words. Update soon, damn it!! |
Reviewed By: Blue Glowstick On: March 01, 2003 19:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome fic...update! |
Reviewed By: devilstitan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2003 21:48 CST
Comment/Review:
i enjoyed reading that even though i've read it before/hope you update soon. |
Reviewed By: devilstitan On: February 25, 2003 12:19 CST
Comment/Review:
good chapter.update soon |
Reviewed By: devilstitan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2003 21:47 CST
Comment/Review:
Hey i couldnt help but review for this. its jus so awesome. i cant wait for you to update!
-Devilstitan |
Reviewed By: ills [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2003 16:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
when are you going to update this |
Reviewed By: speed demon On: January 08, 2003 23:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOVE the fic!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: MarronBriefs [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2003 16:09 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi,I have a V/P website and was looking to host some stories.I really like yours and if you want me to host all your V/P stories I would be honor.
http://vp.mchan.com
Thanks,
Victoria
vegeta@i-love-cats.com |
Reviewed By: Devilstitan On: June 04, 2003 18:01 CDT
Comment/Review:
how could you end it there!? i hope you update soon |
Reviewed By: SaiyanGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2003 14:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutly love your fic. I can't wait for the next chapter because i have no clue what will happen next. I only hope that you will update sooN! |
Reviewed By: Yuffie lockheart On: January 19, 2003 16:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THIS FIC IS KICK ASS!!!
ALL I HAVE 2 SAY IS PLEASE UPDATE!!! |
Reviewed By: Cherry_Saiya-jin [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2002 21:59 CDT
Comment/Review:
What gonna happen ta Pan? I wanna know!!!!Write more, please!!!
~``~Cherry~``~ |
Reviewed By: Set Aiidoneus On: September 29, 2002 11:56 CDT
Comment/Review:
Ooh! I love this fic! Can't wait for an update!! |
Reviewed By: noneofyourfuckingbussiness On: September 27, 2002 17:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i LOVE your fic update soon!!! |
Reviewed By: Cherry_Saiya-jin [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2002 21:48 CDT
Comment/Review:
Liking this very much...I have a strange liking for V/P fics, though there aren't that many...please write more, i'm looking forard to it!!
Cheers,
~``~Cherry~``~ |
Reviewed By: karena On: September 23, 2002 21:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yahoo! i can find you somewhere besides ffn. which doesn't work half the time anyway. looking forward to more of your work. |
Reviewed By: caged bird On: September 21, 2002 00:32 CDT
Comment/Review:
and why the hell do reviews need titles? but you get a 10/10 for everything up there. i'm just lazy. (incidentally, wouldn't a 10/10 make one?)
anyways, glad that you've decided to continue this fic despite ff.net's asinine idea to cut the NC-17 works. but maybe they're based in Iraq or something where they don't have freedom of speech.
:) |
Reviewed By: Sam On: September 20, 2002 19:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your fic, please update soon;)
Sam |
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