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| "The Demon's True Instinct" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: Sessh's Girl On: January 25, 2011 22:59 EST
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I loved it! You're an amazing writer, and I applaud you on InuYasha's demon form. I hate it in other fics where he talks like he's never spoken a full sentence in his life. You did amazingly in the demon-speaking department, if that doesn't sound too stupid on my part. But anyways, awesome job! I loved it, and it was just totally cool. And once again, I cannot applaud you enough for actually having InuYasha talk coherently and all in his demon form. It was great! | Reviewed By: Ancient Spirit [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2010 17:21 EST
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Really good, smutty piece. I enjoy this a lot.
| Title: ur so right
Reviewed By: inugomelover [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2009 23:05 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i think ure sooooo right about inuyasha not being a mindless monster when he's a demon. i cant believe that people would think that when every time he changed to a full demon all he did was proect kagome! even the first time that happened he WARNED her to back off just IN CASE he hurt her! he was protecting her even then damnit!! so how could anyone think that lowly about him!?!?! i will say, though, that he can be a bit more blood thursty then needed but still, he's not mindless. FAR from it! loved the story and keep writing! unlike 'when sprring comes' this story finshed without an erge (from me at least) for there to be a sequel. this was a great oneshot! 'when spring comes' (to me) is a GREAT story, just not meant to be a oneshot. keep up the good work and update 'when spring comes' asap!! ^__^
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