| "Mate" Reviews/Comments [ 19 ] |
Reviewed By: Sesshoumaru'sPriestess [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2011 19:44 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!!! If that was your first lemon then whew!!!! That was good as hell and you should never have doubted it. Truly delicious......... |
Title: SHIIIIIT
Reviewed By: Inu Tenshi 1 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2009 02:36 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
KAMIIII!!! DO RELIZE HOW MANY COLD SHOWERS I'M GONNA NEED NOW!!!??? Shit! Nothing's more of a turn on then a dominaint demon Inuyasha and one who speaks dirty too none the less. This is gonna sound clesha (don't know how to spell it) but a star is shining on you! *poses and crys dramaticly* Keep up the SEXY work!! ;)
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Title: Mate
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2009 14:00 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Title: um just a note
Reviewed By: kjpanny [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2009 22:45 EST
Comment/Review:
yo! guys thanx for the awesome reviews um, some of you did not like the fact that i used the words whore and slut. I read thrrough and though by the time i was through, i was a red tomato, i realized you were right, so i made two changes. thanx and bye bye
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Reviewed By: Lunabell [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2009 02:23 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yeah...the slut and whore stuff would have turned me off. But GREAT job!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2009 23:23 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wonderful story... nice ending... really liked it... good job... great work...
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Reviewed By: XXXxKINGAWSOMExXXX [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2009 14:41 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GREAT is all i can say but, slut and whore were turn offs and personally id like them to have a loving relationship.:)GREAT JOB(:
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Reviewed By: GhostReader [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2009 19:20 EST
Comment/Review:
another great chapter, even beter than the first. great work!
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Reviewed By: Moonfiregoldeyes [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2009 19:12 EST
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Great! And I couldn't see Inuyasha being a 'gentle' lover. for god's sake, he's a freaking demon! check your spelling luv, the last line said 'fats' asleep. But over all lovely and wants more!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2009 19:12 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
interesting story... like it so far... at least inuyasha & kagome are mates now... but what caused the fight in the first place... update when you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: animeangel47 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2009 19:06 EST
Comment/Review:
this is great update soon please
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Reviewed By: GhostReader [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2009 15:03 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Update soon!
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Reviewed By: animeangel47 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2009 13:29 EST
Comment/Review:
this is great please update soon
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Reviewed By: DARKENED DEMONESS [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2009 01:38 EST
Comment/Review:
That was great!!! Please finish the story!!!
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Reviewed By: leeluu On: January 11, 2009 01:38 EST
Comment/Review:
Please continue this I want to know what happens, and why did he kiss Kikyo?
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Title: Sorry for the double post.
Reviewed By: Lunabell [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2009 01:29 EST
Comment/Review:
Oh and he called her a slut too. That would be a big turn off for me...>_
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Reviewed By: Lunabell [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2009 01:27 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ummm....I wish he wouldn't call her a whore...and What was he doing with kikyo?
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Reviewed By: Kagome_rocks On: January 11, 2009 00:27 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You sould continue it I love it!
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Reviewed By: chich On: January 11, 2009 00:10 EST
Comment/Review:
Wow. i like it and i believe that you should continue writing and post what happens next...please?
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