Reviewed By:TamaRose [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2009 00:50 CDT Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: I really liked what you wrote.I just wish it would have been so much longer.An story that evolved around thiere lust for one another then maybe turn into an actual relationship.Maybe even a future where they would get "married" or get torn apart by someone else.The possabilities are endless.Still,I loved every moment of it.