| "Alpha and Omega" Reviews/Comments [ 14 ] |
Title: More
Reviewed By: Wigi2 On: May 14, 2012 17:17 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It seems to be a slow building fanfic, but I do like what I see. I would love to see more and to keep up the writing, I am looking forward to when Bret goes back to his home world. Sounds exciting. |
Reviewed By: Aerun On: November 22, 2011 10:54 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just finished reading your Inuyasha fanfic 'Its my life' and had nothing else to do, so I decided to look for other stories from you... Aaaand...seems like I'm going to stick around now, since I fell in love with your writing style and funny-ness XD I'm probably going to check your profile at least twice every week from now on, so YESH, I'm officially addicted^^ Going to read the other fictions now, Me |
Title: More!!!
Reviewed By: Wigi [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2011 19:11 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story just has so many questions unanswered!!! Argh I was reading it and just hoping to learn more. I loved the interaction between the two! I just wished the story would progress more. I have so many questions!!! |
Title: Love it
Reviewed By: Wigi On: January 09, 2011 20:05 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The begginng was a little hard to get into, but then I started hoping that he would be found and I found myself cheering along with the characters and it was lovely, I really hope that you do more!!!! It was just getting Started! |
Reviewed By: Nikkitoranoko [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2010 02:10 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. I thought I wouldn't like it at the first chapter but then, all of a sudden, I loved it!!! That takes a lot of work, to make me change my mind. It truly is a shame this has less views. But if anything you should continue.
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Reviewed By: iizeeepic On: October 26, 2009 17:27 EDT
Comment/Review:
enjoyment factor is 210 ~~ i love this story dearly. poor brett XD he must be confused. i find myself wondering how many arms he will have o.o do they have any other cool powers ? :DD -cant wait to read more- update soon !!
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Reviewed By: Angel of Androgyny [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2009 00:21 EDT
Comment/Review:
Oh my god!!! You finally updated this story! I hope everything is going okay with your father, after I read that I figured you'd be going on a hiatus for however long. Not updating anything! I'm so excited to see this story developed and finally they meet! I was really surprised about the six armed thing pleasantly surprised it just shows how creative your are. Also a guy could really multitask with six arms if ya know what I mean. Anyways awesome chapter and the name Janos is such a cool name!
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Title: chapter 2
Reviewed By: Haywire_Hakaze [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2009 16:41 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is actually a pretty good premise, and I like where you're taking it so far. The only issue I have is slight, and it's mainly punctuation and accompanying fragment sentences. I'd advise finding a beta, but really the errors can be glossed over by the reader. It'd just make the story more enjoyable, I think, if the words had a more easy flow to them. As for Brett's dual encounters with Janos: I am extremely happy that Brett didn't immediately accept what he was hearing and thought this "hobo" was crazy. Both Miles and Brett both reacted how I expect real people to act, and I appreciate the realness of the situation. Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Angel of Androgyny [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2009 16:14 EDT
Comment/Review:
Gah another cliffhanger! It's getting good and I'm definately hooked. This chapter was pretty funny especially the part when the giant was threatening Miles. "WILL!" *punches wall* Hilarious.
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Reviewed By: Angel of Androgyny [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2009 22:52 EDT
Comment/Review:
Oh that is just mean of you such a cliffhanger. I like it though very mysterious.
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Reviewed By: Black Wolf Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2009 22:25 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I always luv ur fics cant wait to see wat happens next
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Reviewed By: *@_@* On: January 16, 2009 12:24 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
*is sitting on edge of seat* ooooooo, what happens next? this is really good. i'll be sad if you drop it.
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Reviewed By: divinlydemonic On: January 15, 2009 13:04 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
ohhhhhh i would love to read more hope u update soon
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Title: I Like It!!! :D
Reviewed By: Passing Reader On: January 15, 2009 10:38 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Usually I don't give ratings out until chapter two or three, but Im just so damn intrested in what happends next! This was very nicely written and did what it was supposed to, capture my attention! I eagerly look forward to the next installment so please continue! Until then~ ;p
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