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| "Twice Shy - Story Completion" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: Prince Of Jupiter [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2009 02:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've been meaning to tell you how much I've been enjoying your take on the sequel to Two Halves, I think DameWren would be quite happy with what you've done. In this chapter though I feel like the events of everything Hinata and Naruto have done almost were for nothing. They've grown very strong but this challenge left them broken and back at square one. It almost doesn't feel fair to either of them. And I expect Hiashi to use the fact that they did kinda fall apart against them. I did like the use of the Falcon summon though. Now we need to see the aftermath here... I know what I expect to see I just hope I only see some of it. And I do look forward to the confrontation between Naruto and Sora, and eventually Kakashi and Sora. Can't wait for next chapter!
| Reviewed By: pilar [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2009 18:03 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I really love reading this story and I am always excited to see it updated. This last chapter promises a really interesting confrontation between Kakashi and Sora, I can't wait for more. I am really curious at to what will happen next, especially when Hiashi will meet Naruto.
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