| "The Dance" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: VegetaDaimoh [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2008 22:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this. In character. Chi-chi has so much love to give. I think most people exaggerate her faults. But the way you've written, you clearly can sympathize with her emotions and how she thinks. Yup, I enjoyed this. It's a little different and more intelligent than the usual DBZ stuff found online.
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Reviewed By: Short Rochester On: November 30, 2002 17:43 CST
Comment/Review:
Pretty cool. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: October 16, 2002 11:29 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG that was so beautiful! Sweet, sentimental yet sad. This is the side of CC you never see on the show, only her yelling and bitching. Fantastic one-shot. You should do more of these. Now if you'll excuse me, I have to raid the tissue box *sniff*. |
Reviewed By: Nikki On: July 28, 2002 03:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was written very well. I think you should make a sequel of it though, because that one left me kinda sad. |
Reviewed By: Jadedbest [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2002 01:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*sniff* Wow! That was really beautiful. I love ChiChi fics like this because I feel the show never shows her much respect when it comes to how much she had to go through. Great Job!
Oh and guess what! I already have the outline for the next chapter of When You Least Expect done! I think I'm back on a roll. Believe it or not when I first started that story I used to update it every other day. Crazy huh? Anyway great songfic. Hope to read more soon.-JB |
Reviewed By: Psyfire [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2002 09:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
*sniff* man that's so sad.. but so good! Poor Chichi.. you know I can hardly think about her, every time I do I get this strange feeling, like the show really used her and cheeted her. They could have at least let Goku say goodbye to her, tell her himself why he left.. ahh well, makes for good fanfics I guess ;) |
