| "Jealousy Comes From The Heart" Reviews/Comments [ 15 ] |
Reviewed By: o0kittyblue0o [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2009 04:18 CDT
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YESH!!! Keep it up and you wont ever be spineless! And always sporkless! i cant believe I dont have this story on my alerts....
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Reviewed By: Kurai-kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2009 19:37 CDT
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NOOOOOOOOOO how could you do this whyyyyy you are evil pure evil XD XD well i really liked this its uber great XD XD well update SOON I really want to know who it is
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Reviewed By: Minnie_2010 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2009 18:26 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I like it, this last chapter has got me sitting on the edge of my seat, cant wait for the next chapter
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Reviewed By: Lynzi18 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2009 22:05 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Noooooo... lol you left me at the edge of my seat!! lol Please Update soon..I'm wondering who is going to be at the door hehehe.. keep up the awesome work
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Reviewed By: bluemoon_175 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2009 14:45 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ohh, I can't wait to read more. This is a really fantastic story and I can't wait to read more. So I hope you try to update asap. Keep up the wonderful job well done.
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Reviewed By: Little Red [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2009 00:16 CDT
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I didnt get past the frist paragraph... you nead a beta... bad...
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Reviewed By: my3rdeyes [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2009 06:38 CDT
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you make me smile all the way.love when keiko and yukina become a spy.dont tell me their revenge back-fire.and seriously i hope it's not kuwabara the one come to kagome room(or worst katai)or genkai!! ;-o.
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Reviewed By: Kula [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2009 02:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like the start to your fic, I can't wait to read a new chapter.
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Reviewed By: my3rdeyes [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2009 05:48 CST
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yeah...please update soon.i love it!!
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Title: Chapter 1
Reviewed By: halfblackwolfdemon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2009 02:59 CST
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Oh! I loved it! (hope Katai doesn't play a big roll and gets killed off by Gorge... Because his wee-wee was to big for her to handle, ROFL!) And... Oh! O can't wait to find out what Keiko's scheming!! *evil chuckle* Please update soon! I totally loved it! :D -Wolfie
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Reviewed By: darknessmoon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2009 17:11 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love it and if keiko has a scheme i'd love to see it play out.
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Reviewed By: ayashi77 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2009 14:11 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like your story i hope you keep going
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2009 13:36 CST
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this is a good story so far. i would like to know how old everyone is since koenma is worried about them being old. i would also like to know what happened with kagome in the past and if she ever sees modern day shippo, inuyasha, sesshomaru, jaken, jinji, kouga, ect.
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Reviewed By: LadyNorth76 On: January 18, 2009 11:50 CST
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I can't fully judge right now since it's only your first chapter. I will say this though, your first chapter was awesome! Update soon. I'll be looking for this fanfic. Thanks.
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Reviewed By: MillicentHellix On: January 18, 2009 07:57 CST
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I think its really cute ^_^ And all of the characters are how they're suppose to be lol. No OOCness. I really like it and hope you continue it Looks like Kurama likes her too Y_Y Hes also a favorite character....lol, ohwell, Hiei is still better...
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