| "The Moon and the Progress Within" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Reviewed By: Megumi On: February 03, 2003 22:01 CST
Comment/Review:
awsome!!! the best thing i ever read amazing |
Reviewed By: vampkestrel [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2003 22:40 CST
Comment/Review:
beautiful i loved it ^_^ |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2003 13:55 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was a good one shot ficcy it tells how Vegeta feels about him self |
Reviewed By: Moonshine587 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2003 12:18 CST
Comment/Review:
Very well written. I am not usually a fan of one-shots, but I really enojoyed this. |
Reviewed By: Onna On: December 25, 2002 00:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yours is really deep writing, did you know? That's why I love it! ^_^ Keep on writing more wonderful stories! |
Reviewed By: Rosicheena On: November 14, 2002 17:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A very damn good fic, if i do say so myself! |
Reviewed By: HardCandyVegetto On: September 17, 2002 22:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is such a deep and emotional story... it really is a lovely work of art. ^_^ not that it means much but i thank you for sharing it. |
Reviewed By: Shateera40@hotmail.com On: August 01, 2002 12:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Gurl dat wuz tight and off da chain. It wuz completly Vegeta,unlike the otha fics in the 3yrs. Making Vegeta fall in love during those times,knowin he doesn't kno what love is during that time until da Buu saga. Datz when he really recognizes Bulma as a woman,with power ova him. Gurl u kept it locked down. Keep doin yo thang! Cuz we all kno Vegeta doesn't luv til da Buu Saga~!lol |
Reviewed By: JadaKirin [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2002 00:29 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is really terrific! Some excellent introspection on the part of Vegeta...
Very Nice. : )
Jada |
Reviewed By: Lonely Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2002 14:31 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG this is soooo good! I hope you continue this. It ain't right for you to be this good of a writer. I mean your stories are all good. Please put another chapter up for this! |
Reviewed By: Psyfire [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2002 09:20 CDT
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oh ya I have to agree with the reviewers.. What a powerful and yet almost soft moment. You can feel the strong currents raging under Vegeta's skin, you can feel the stone like dedication of Bulma. There is no storm he can create that she can't weather because of him. The more he pushes her away, the more he gives her the power to stay. hmm this is how it would have to be, if it had actually been written in the show. Ahh well, all the more amunition for great fanfics like this ;) I have to say though.. that one line "This is where you belong. Under me!" just about blew my mind. What a totally perfect Vegeta line! You can read into it, see just how much he adores Bulma, and yet you can feel the Princly pride just radiate from him with that one line.. Perfect. |
Reviewed By: bura400 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2002 06:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thats definately it .....This is brilliant, wonderous, stupendous, and kicks the shit (tops the cake too)! ^_^ You are one of my new V/B fanfiction writers so keep up the GREAT WORK. *sticks her tounge out at Kafei* Bura-chan |
Reviewed By: Susan On: July 16, 2002 21:40 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!! SHEER BRILLIANCE! You really got into Veggie's head, oh and the song, definitely one of Rush's best and one of my faves. He is dealing with conflict of emotions on a grand scale, and it's heartbreaking. You got to hand it to Bulma though, she's one brave cookie. Anyone else, asking and saying the things she did, would've been pulverized in a heartbeat. Again, BRAVO!!! |
