| "Hellsing Goes American" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: Elva18 On: March 25, 2011 22:56 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
My mom gets migraines, one almost lasted an entire week! She said that the one thing that works is hot tea. Oh by the way great story so far love it! |
Reviewed By: Wolf_Lbh [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2010 08:31 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You make spelling mistakes, you know you know you make them and refuse to use a spellchecker. Therefor they are no longer spelling mistakes, or acts of stupidity, but simply you refusing to be anything but yourself. I love it. The style of writing is excellent. I read the whole thing, couldn't put it down. It is original and well written and very fun to read. I can't give this anything but a 10. I just wish things were longer ^.^ The only mistake I spotted was one of your bizarrely in depth smiley faces triggers the underline command for this site. You should probably avoid that in future chapters. XOXO - Wolfie
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Title: ok....
Reviewed By: me again On: December 20, 2009 21:41 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok it started off good but now it seems like a porno or a way for you to get rid of sexual energies which is okay sorta but your going way to far out all in all lay off the sex scenes
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Title: idk
Reviewed By: me again On: December 19, 2009 19:09 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
first off let me cangadulate you, you;ve gone from never knowing me to regular visits. bravo. anywho i love this story and vampire knight never saw the ending coming. ps you should read king of thorns its a decent manga and the only one my library seems to own
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Title: forgot
Reviewed By: you'll never know me On: December 17, 2009 21:46 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
sorry forgot this in my other review ta ta for now
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Title: lol
Reviewed By: you'll never know me On: December 17, 2009 21:44 EST
Comment/Review:
omg i love this story i cant wait to finish it but i have to get off right now so I'll start with chapter 14 tomarrow. ps i have the same ticklish spots on my neck. teehee
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Reviewed By: sesshomarujc [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2009 20:08 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely love this story; though i really hate goriness but if I don't think about it too much it's fine. It's odd that I do like this but you are very smart and I like your writing style. I also like Japanese history, but I don't know a lot. Please keep going, besides some spelling errors and a few sentence structures gone funky, this story is great! :)
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Title: Dude...
Reviewed By: discoqueen [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2009 21:30 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was never one to read Hellsing fanfictions; but I was browsing the fanfiction forum on Gaia (at least...I think this was where I found the link for Hellsing Goes American). I've been reading your fic nonstop, maybe getting up from the computer once or twice for food and stuff. This is an awesome fic. I love the little plot twists (as well as the lemons). Can't wait to read more!
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Reviewed By: ani_cat_candy [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2009 15:16 EST
Comment/Review:
Thank you SO much for the constructive criticism! I fixed the paragraph thing.. I had it in paragraphs on WordPad but I guess it just didn't want to work after I uploaded it.. Again, thank you so much!
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Title: It needs more..
Reviewed By: clusterlizard1 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2009 19:25 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 3 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 2 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Comment/Review:
You need to work on your editing. The layout is all in one paragraph, and most people will look at that and then simply leave before reading. It's a good idea, but you also need to flesh it out more. ~clusterlizard1 Please don't take this the wrong way, the last I want is for you to think I'm flaming you.
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