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| "Sango's Song" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: Eikyuu Kosai Awards [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2009 10:21 CDT
Comment/Review:
Congratulations! Your fic has been nominated for Best Romance at Eikyuu Kosai, the Miroku/Sango Fandom Awards. Established in 2009, this group strives to recognize those outstanding pieces of fanfiction and art from the Inuyasha universe, which put special emphasis on the Mir/San pairing. Twice a year, our members come together to nominate and vote in 17 different categories, including a special 'Hidden Treasure' award, for those gems that might have been missed the first time around. To learn more about Eikyuu Kosai, please visit http://community.livejournal.com/mirsanawards/ Our current slate of nominations can be found here: http://community.livejournal.com/mirsanawards/3142.html Nominations run from July 1 - July 14th, 2009, with voting from July 18 - July 31st, 2009. To pick up your nominee banner, please follow this link: http://i812.photobucket.com/albums/zz43/eikyuu_kosai/july2009/nominee-july2 009.jpg Congratulations once again, and please feel free to join in the proceedings! **Please note: you may receive this notification multiple times on the same fic, if it has been nominated into different categories.**
| Reviewed By: LuxKen27 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2009 19:05 CST
Comment/Review:
A very interesting glimpse into Sango's character as she deals with her confusion/frustration with Miroku :) I very much liked your imagery. I'm not sure I completely agree with your analysis of her character, but it was believable in this context. A small point - the punctuation of your dialogue tags is wrong, and it was a bit jarring to read. Just an example -- "I hope I'm not intruding." He said should be "I hope I'm not intruding," he said. It might be a good idea to find a beta? All told, though - a good first start at writing this pairing, which I also find quite difficult to do justice. I think you have a nice read on their dynamic, and hope you give them another shot. I look forward to seeing more! Cheers! :)
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