Title: Great Ending Reviewed By:Mors' [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2009 13:19 CST Comment/Review: You wrote a magnificent story with a great ending. Grammer and spelling on you latest chapter was good. Keep up the good work and write some more.
Title: Great Story Reviewed By:Mors' [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2009 18:18 CST Comment/Review: This was a very intriguing story you have written here. Grammar was good for the most part the only thing I would do is try to break up the paragraphs a little more. Other wise the story was greatly written keep the good work.