| "When She Comes Back" Reviews/Comments [ 14 ] |
Reviewed By: kawaii_tori [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2010 07:37 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awww...sooo cute...:) really enjoyed reading it..great job guys.:):) |
Reviewed By: LookAtMe [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2010 04:02 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
we already know what was going on with kagome...just read the last chapter of the manga...the well wasn't working that's why she couldn't come back. But then she had a feeling...Kagome had always loved Inuyasha and we always knew that. I think you did an awesome job...it was great to see Inuyasha's POV for those three years for a change.
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Title: A pleasure again!
Reviewed By: Eris of Chaos [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2010 16:08 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So I have now read this story 5 times over the past year almost and it just keeps getting better!!!
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Title: it's awesome, but sad
Reviewed By: thecatzpajamas [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2009 21:44 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i read heartless before i read this, and it's SO well written.... but the last words he says in this oneshot are that he'll never need anything else because he's gotten everything he could ever want =( and then everybody dies and gets memory loss.... YOU ANGST TOO WELL MY FRIEND
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Reviewed By: MadMistress65 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2009 12:34 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awww, this was cute, humorous, and touching at the same time. When you suggested in "Heartless" to read this before continuing on with the chapter, I ran right downstairs to my computer and loaded it up. Definitely helped me understand the plot for Heartless much better. Everything sort of fell into place after that. Bravo!! Excellent!
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Reviewed By: Luna Chick [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2009 03:03 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great fic, with an interesting twist that adds a morbid humor to the tone of the piece. I like how you connect the time so it feels that it's just passing him by. It moves for everyone but him. My only real problem is why she took three years to come back? Even if it was the well hadn't worked til then, I need to know something from her. In the end, I feel he's still dreaming because she's so flat. She's so ready to jump into bed, I wish there had been an attempt at talk, or something to show us what had been holding her back. Otherwise, great story.
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Reviewed By: Knittingknots [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2009 16:29 EDT
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Congratulations! Your fiction has won an award from the Feudal Association for the September 2008 term! Founded in 2005 by author/artist, Dark Avenger, and currently owned by artist/author, Inuyashloverr and author, KnittingKnots, the Feudal Association consists of writers, artists, and enthusiasts of the InuYasha fandom. But aside from that, we are also proud to say that we are an awards guild that recognizes fan-fiction and artwork. Several times a year we nominate, vote, and hand out honors to some of the best creations in the fandom. Our official website can be found here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/ Our Yahoo Group, where the nominating and voting occurs, can be found here: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ Links to all of the awards for 2009 can be found here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/pickup.html First place awards will be on permanent display here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/2009art.html Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group! Please pick up your award here: http://s286.photobucket.com/albums/ll109/FeudalAssociation/Fiction_March09/ ~ Inuyashloverr & KnittingKnots Owners of the Feudal Association
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Reviewed By: Knittingknots [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2009 19:20 EDT
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This piece has been nominated at the Feudal Association! Founded in 2005 by author/artist, Dark Avenger, and currently owned by authors/artist, Inuyashaloverr and KnittingKnots, the Feudal Association consists of writers, artists, and enthusiasts of the InuYasha fandom. But aside from that, we are also proud to say that we are an awards guild that recognizes fan-fiction and artwork. Several times a year we nominate, vote, and hand out honors to some of the best creations in the fandom. Our official website can be found here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/ The current nominations pages are here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/nommedfics.html (Fiction) http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/nommedart.html (Fanart) Check them out to see what you were nominated for! Our Yahoo Group, where the nominations and voting occurs, can be found here: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group! ~ Inuyashaloverr & KnittingKnots Owners/Administrators of the Feudal Association ***Please Note: You may receive this notice more than once if you've been nominated for several awards. They will appear as reviews on your nominated works.
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Reviewed By: xxxshikonxxx [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2009 06:48 EST
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i would also love so see Kagome's point of view...it will be nice if you can do that
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Reviewed By: xxxshikonxxx [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2009 08:06 EST
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great story...10 out of 5
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Reviewed By: sexxiigurrll0204 not logged in On: January 25, 2009 15:58 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is so cute :) good job!
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Title: nice work!
Reviewed By: ScarletRaven1001 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2009 06:57 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a really nice fanfic. i think yu managed to portray inuyasha spot on. ^_^
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Reviewed By: LordLore [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2009 14:45 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, nice Idea, great story, nothing to say Keep up the good work Lord Lore
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Reviewed By: Raina.. On: January 21, 2009 02:52 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awwww!!! I love this story!!! So bittersweet and cute I know its asking much but, could you continue?? XD
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