| "Zero vs Kira" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: alyssa james [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2010 13:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, I read this and thought it was pretty good. I've always liked when two characters with similar personalities are each other's opponents. I would really love it if you continued this story. I wanna know what happens next ;)
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Reviewed By: White Wolf of the Moon Deux [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2010 03:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh thank god a few more chapters of the most amazing crossover I have ever had the pleasure of reading, and I cannot believe that Lelouch hasn't pulled an L and started to figure out more about Kira. Also I am really expecting L to just pop up sometime and totally bust Lights balls. Anyways I am unsure if Lloyd is the best choice, i mean he is an awesome character and I would hate to see him die.
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Reviewed By: SakuraCa [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2009 12:36 CST
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I had totally forgotten about this story. All in all I liked how the story progressed though I'm still undecided whether making Lloyd was a good or bad idea. Good thing that Lelouch didn't realise right off bat how Kira's killing method. Can I ask you to post this story on FFN net though? It's very hard to follow stories on MediaMiner.
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Reviewed By: White Wolf of the Moon Deux [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2009 00:50 CDT
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Man the hollow thing almost killed me man. anyways are you going to finish this, it is incredible.
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Title: Comment with Ideas
Reviewed By: KuroEspada [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2009 19:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great fanfic. I can't wait to see how Lelouch and Light will battle each other. I agree with sportstud's idea about adding L in the story as well as other Death Note chracters like like the task force, Near, and Mello. It'll also be interesting if Light either infiltrate the Order of the Black Knights or enroll into Ashford or both. I hope these ideas will be helpful and hope you continue to update.
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Title: Holy Shit! A crossover that's actually good
Reviewed By: sportstud [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2009 18:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This has been the best crossover fic I have ever read. I had that same idea in my mind too on how it would be if Lelouch and Light actually fought one another. I think that this fic has a lot of promise and I hope to see more of it. I love the joke about the shinnigami yelling 'hollow' nice adding bleach into the mix. I do wonder though if that anime will also be crossed over as well. Also I was just wondering when in death note did Light get telleported because if it's before that news reporters death then she could be Light's personal cock helper and it would be even more interesting if L was put into the mix. What lengths can this fic goes is up to you but as I said it has an exponential amount of potential. Update soon!
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Title: Very interesting.
Reviewed By: SakuraCa [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2009 15:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked this fic (so much that I registered just to review). The writing was solid and the grammar was good. However, what I liked most about it was the plot. It is very original, now with most of the Britannian Royal house gone (and the last two members in hiding) Brittania is sure to be plunged into chaos and maybe civil war and the whole CG war is going to change a lot the next few years. Lelouch and Light are both the kind of people to find a way to benefit out of every situation and this is the kind of environment that these two thrive in. Just can't wait to read about them - trying to best the other one (because I just can't see these two work well together). Well thank you for writing. SakuraCa
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