| "Amaterasu" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Title: wow!
Reviewed By: pibi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2009 13:29 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey it was great! i loved it! pls. write a sequel or something, hey just 1 thing can u put spaces in between paragraphs or something? i just find it a bit hard to read! xoxo!
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Reviewed By: fez On: January 26, 2009 23:13 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i agree with demonfox cant wait for your next fic. no constuctive criticsm necissary fic was brilliant, only thing that could be done possibly to double space its harder to read on the computer. writing was perfect thx
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Reviewed By: DemanFox [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2009 11:20 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was good i hope you write more I want to read what happens next between Ita/sua.
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