| "True Love At Last" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] |
Reviewed By: anonomous On: July 16, 2002 22:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
it is extremeley short and corny. how can she be crying about losing her boyfriend and then suddenly reveal that she is in love with Goten? I think you need to do your homework in writing class because this story was horrible |
Reviewed By: PrincessBulma [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2002 21:46 CDT
Comment/Review:
that was very creative! i've read quite a few fics and i dont think i've ever read one like yours great job! review one of mine sometime if you have any time. thanks!! |
