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| "Another Chance" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: Nikkie23534 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2009 15:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a good chapter, a little short, but good. I do have one question. I'm not clear if this is a mild Inucest story, just brotherly love. Another, if u want to have some humor in it. Put Sesshomaru in an embrassing moment. Have him doing something extremely un-Sesshomaru like. And, have InuYasha catch it. Put InuYasha down wind of Sesshomaru and on his human night, so not 2 b detected! A guilty secret between them. Does that help? B reading U!
| Reviewed By: Nikkie23534 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2009 13:51 CST
Comment/Review:
Awww! Come on InuYasha, grab hold of the olive branch and make up! This was a very good start. It has a lot of room for humor and emotional outbreaks! Update soon- B reading U!
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