| "Rukia for a day" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Title: Short & Sweet!
Reviewed By: ChosenOne On: March 05, 2009 02:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I feel like Orihime is a lot nicer than she is portrayed here. That being said, I love your other characterizations. You had Rukia down pat. Great wrap up, great plot bunny.
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Reviewed By: Anonymousgirl On: January 30, 2009 17:21 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was an awesome story! I loved it so much. There are few mistakes but who cares about that? They are really small....but this was an awesome story. The ending...it kind of reminded me of what he says in the new Bleach film (Fade to Black). Emphasis on kind of. Cause then people are going to get the wrong idea.
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Title: Interesting
Reviewed By: Mors' [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2009 22:29 CST
Comment/Review:
That was a very unique story you have written there. It was nicely written and little if any grammar errors. Only thing is you usually do not hear Rukia call Ichigo a baka at least not from what I can recall. Well keep up the great work and keep on writing.
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