| "Beneath It All" Reviews/Comments [ 37 ] |
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2009 04:22 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
great update... glad that kagome & sesshoumaru were taken to the hospital... good that sesshoumaru is feeling guilty... looks like everyone in kagome's hospital room knows about her sad story now... bankotsu is a good friend... and seems that kanna is getting better... funny that kagome & sesshoumaru are still arguing - then he kissed her... what's next... update when you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: Katarina On: April 12, 2009 23:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Is there any way you can go ahead and get the next chapter out?!
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Title: OMBOB
Reviewed By: Kurai-kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2009 22:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH MY BOB ON A BIKE!!!!! this is sooo good you are an awesome writer i got so hooked I RE$ALLY WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENED!!!! PLZZZZZZZZ UPDATE I'M BEGGING I WILL WAIT FOR THE REVIEW *sits on computer with coffee and skittles* PLZZZ UPDATE SOON
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Reviewed By: silverflamingkitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2009 16:08 CDT
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That was great..... i wonder who was smoking in the stairwell... and what is going to happen next.... great cliffhanger by the way. update when you can please! thx for the story!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2009 05:12 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
great update... seems that mr. taishou expects a lot from kagome... nice that kagome is helping out... but looks like sesshoumaru's prank turned quite deadly... who started the fire with the cigarette stub?... and where was inuyasha?... will kagome & sesshoumaru be alright?... what's next... update when you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: Wreakpene On: April 07, 2009 19:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
very intersting and humorous. i didn't realize i can set ratings so sorry about that. great job!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2009 13:17 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
great update... another interesting confrontation... glad that kagome stands up for herself and didn't back down... nice that kagome & bankotsu are friends... good that kagome met kanna too - maybe if bankotsu & kagome go visit her, she'll get better... nice that kagome met sesshoumaru & inuyasha's father who is the principal of the school... and now she's agreed to help him change sesshoumaru?... what's next... update when you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2009 00:47 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
great update... seems that kagome has made some friends... and interesting confrontation with sesshoumaru, inuyasha & kouga... like how kagome is headstrong and stands up for herself... nice that bankotsu is helping kagome - got her a job too... but seems that kagome is in another confrontation with sesshoumaru... what will kagome do now... what's next... update when you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: yashandkag4ever(not logged-in) On: February 04, 2009 03:50 CST
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wow, i'm an idiot. i should look at the summary more often. unless, you just updated it to say s/k, then i'm alright. ah! i loved it. when the rock made contact with the window, i felt so bad for Kagome, but i laughed so hard. and when Sesshomaru got out of the car, i thought,"oh shit" for her. i very much love this fic. plus, it makes me laugh. a key factor to fanfics i read. anyways, keep up the good work and hope the next update is soon.
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2009 01:35 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
great update... seems that kagome can handle herself well... like how she stands up for herself and be nice at the same time... and she's met sesshoumaru already... looks like their first meeting was quite shaky... what's next... update when you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: Sabrina1204 On: February 04, 2009 00:37 CST
Comment/Review:
I'm really enjoying this story. I hope you don't discontinue it. I look forward to your next update. Could you just clear up how her getting into this school will help her keep Souta? You had said that she needed a stable job, not school...just a little confused on that point. Thanks!
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Reviewed By: yashandkag4ever(not logged-in) On: February 03, 2009 03:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Wow. i really like it. is this gonna be a sess/kag? because that would be awesome! don't let my username fool you. i read Sesshomaru's name and squealed. i said to myself," i already know i'm gonna like this." please update really soon. like within the course of 2 weeks at max please. this is well written and i find myself craving more. can't wait for the next update and hope it's soon.
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Reviewed By: inu-babe [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2009 00:19 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awsome story so far and i really like hats happened. update as soon as you can plz!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: funnyduckie1 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2009 18:41 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great fic! I wonder wat will happen next.. plz update soon..
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2009 13:57 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
interesting story... like it so far... wonder what happens next... update when you can... please and thank you...
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