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Reviewed By: Tashwampa [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2010 22:52 CDT
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Please don't delay on the updates. I really like this story. It really does have strong potential.
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Title: Best Fanfic !!
Reviewed By: CrystalAmber [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2010 20:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NO part of this fan fiction is boring - the whole thing is interesting and enjoyable! ^_^ And I'm serious about that... Sometimes other people's fanfics make me bored at some times... This one doesn't and I'm not lieing!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2009 04:17 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... seems that kagome is in a very bad situation now... she's being swept away by naraku - like she's in a daze... and now she has only naraku protecting her and no other friends... what is inuyasha planning?... what's up with bankotsu?... who is naraku's father?... how does he know kagome?... what will sesshoumaru do now?... will kagome need to talk to sesshoumaru's father about her situation at school?... what's next... update when you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2009 04:57 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... seems that things have gotten worse for kagome... naraku's appearance sure has caused problems and kagome's caught in the middle... what's next... update when you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: --ColorfulxDemons-- On: August 22, 2009 16:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Gah, I love your writing. Its very original and really changed my perspective on the InuYasha series. Like a 'What if they all lived in the modern human world?' way. You are an excellent writing and I can't wait to read the next chapter :]
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2009 19:49 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... seems that naraku is the "boyfriend"... why doesn't kagome remember him... and he is kikyo's brother?... looks like kagome is in another mess... interesting moments between bankotsu and sesshoumaru - and his conclusion also... what's next... update when you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: Kurai-kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2009 13:38 CDT
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this chapter is really awesome and wow who is her boyfriend i would really like to know but for some strange reason i feel like its either naraku or hojo gah im so confused
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2009 07:02 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i got a bit addicted to this XD even though im a Ses/Kag fan, but this one is great XD not all lovely dovely, bloody love it XD but i nearly slipped and hit my head on the table (leaning into my hand) when i read 'Im her boyfriend!' HOLY SHITE!!! who the hell is it O.o but Sango saying 'Arrogant prick' i pissed myself laughing everything i heard and read it XD plus you have gain a reader ^___^
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2009 03:33 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... seems that the guys have started their punishment... looks like inuyasha is still bitter at kagome... nice that kanna is slowly getting better - good that kagome and bankotsu are helping her... so kagome & sesshoumaru have been thinking alot about their situation... and now a new guy claims to be kagome's boyfriend?... what are the reactions... what's next... update when you can.. please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: mariposa_miko [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2009 03:28 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HOW DARE YOU LEAVE ME HANGING!!!!!!!ok seriously that was freaking fantastic and i really want to read more!!! who is this mysterious boyfriend?? i want to KNOW! please update soon....like maybe tomorrow or the day after tomorrow. or whenever you can as fast as you can!! everything is amazing. the plot is original and i LOVE the witty arguments between Sess and Kags!!! really you are such an amazing writer...already this is in my opinion way better then some bestselling books i have read. kudos and keep it up!! please update!
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Reviewed By: kyokatz On: June 25, 2009 21:56 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this sessy and kagome story please update really soon!!!! PLEASE
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2009 10:19 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... seems that kagome kinda saved them from a harsher punishment... interesting interactions between kagome and sesshoumaru... what's next... update when you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: Kurai-kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2009 00:32 CDT
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wow this story is amazing it really is i like how the punishment was and i think the whole kiss on the cheek was adorable. well as always you are an awesome writer and well update whenever you can
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Reviewed By: Kurai-kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2009 21:09 CDT
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awwwwwwww this is the cutest chapter ever. I love the fact that he chased after her how cute is that and well your story is great and i love it soo much so update when you can
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2009 10:08 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... seems that sesshoumaru & kagome kinda get along now... although they still have their arguments... so it was inuyasha who started the fire... good that bankotsu beat him up for that... bankotsu is a good friend... interesting reaction from sesshoumaru when kagome said that she was leaving for good... looks like the others know about them kissing now too... what's next... update when you can... please and thank you!
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