"Digital World Picnic" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: Flaming-izumi On: August 23, 2005 17:13 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Aww that was soo cute! And kinky and awww all those pairings are my favourite!!! Especially Jyoushirou,Daiken and Taito, hehehe. But the others I super enjoy aswell, no better pairings. I like how you wrote the story, haven't read one like it in a while. Good job!
| Reviewed By: manawolf [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2003 19:57 CDT Comment/Review: Oh, this story needs comments.... it is so sweet! Lovely interactions, great banter, inventive bit with the pregnancy. |
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