| "Evangelion: OMEGA" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: someguyouthere On: July 04, 2004 16:55 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok, so, this is a really good fic, good work on mantaining the plot like that and in keeping the ACC's appearing more people than appearing like superman, what you should do is thicken the plot a little, there are some parts in various chapters that neither improve the plot but also dont ruin it, you should quive use to everything. Again, Good work, Keep Writing
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Reviewed By: diabloelmo On: September 26, 2003 22:57 CDT
Comment/Review:
very nice, imaginative. best one ive read for a while. keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: Anonym On: November 15, 2002 17:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just started reading this three days ago, after class. I have to say, I'm hooked. I would love to read move of this. Overall, style and everything is great. You can at least say you know the difference between "their" "there" and "they're", which is more than can be said for many authors I've seen. When can we expect another update? I see the update thing for the last chapter says March 18th, and I'm hoping you havn't given up on this great work of fan-fiction before it's fully finished. |
Reviewed By: Godzilla On: October 24, 2002 22:11 CDT
Comment/Review:
did kristen elizabeth post the lemon part in chapter at any other site because fanfiction.net got rid of all NC-17 material so it isn't there. if she did and you know where it is could you E-Mail me the site? my e-mail address is supremeguyver80@hotmail.com, thank you |
Reviewed By: Godzilla On: October 24, 2002 17:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a great fic, there is only a little bit of bad grammar, and i got a question, did that one person Kristen Elizabeth post the lemon part anywhere else? because fanfiction.net got rid of all there NC-17 shit (bastards) so it's not their any more, if she did post it somewhere else and you know where it is please E-Mail me the sites name, my E-Mail is hypergodzilla@hotmail.com, and supremeguyver80@hotmail.com. thank you |
Reviewed By: *god x hunter* On: October 11, 2002 09:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Overall,it isn't too bad,although,in my personal opinion,it requires more twisting scenes,especially with the angels' parts.Other thn that,quite good |
Reviewed By: *god x hunter* On: October 11, 2002 09:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok,so it isn't so original & enjoying ,but it is kind of interesting,the attack of the angels however isn't quite ....interesting/exciting.You can do better,keep it up. |
Reviewed By: LightPriestess [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2002 12:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
This is an excellent fic, you are doing an excellent job, keep it up |
Reviewed By: alkaiser On: January 07, 2002 22:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is quite possibly one of the best eva fics ive ever read, really good job. hope you come out with chapter 9 soon |
Reviewed By: anonymous On: September 06, 2001 16:39 CDT
Comment/Review:
Good fan fic. It has really good characters considering you had to make them up. Only one complaint I have is that Michiru doesn't ask about her parents a lot. That is a major character flaw. I mean if you were her wouldn't you be asking Misato questions left and right about them. Maybe you have something planned I dont know but that is the only real flaw I see. Oh...why EVA 14 and not 02. If Shinji's mech was some how picked out of that "EVA coolant why not Asuka's". Oh here are some little ideas for episodes or what ever...maybe her parents aren't dead just so deep in a secret organization that no one knows(not that great I agree but this is better)what if one angle has to power to transport things in time and Michiru gets sent back before they died. Just a suggestion. Good story though. |
