| "The Weaver Telarius" Reviews/Comments [ 17 ] |
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Reviewed By: Phoenix Element [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2003 07:42 CDT
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Intense! Great chapter - I ate it right up. Those are pretty dire straights for our poor protagonists, there. I trust you have a ready way to save the world? *melodramatic voice* But how many more must die? Looking forward to the next post, m'love!
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Reviewed By: VagabondKnight On: July 10, 2003 00:15 CDT
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That was amazing. An excellent chapter indeed:-)
I hope that Phillip is laughing along with you Telarius
-Craig |
Reviewed By: VagabondKnight On: July 01, 2003 18:09 CDT
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I can understand why this chapter took so long to complete now.
I was saying to myself during Telarius' faux pas in the meeting scene it happened because he wasn't a Mentat. You can imagine my amusement later on;-)
good work, my friend
-Craig |
Reviewed By: VagabondKnight On: June 30, 2003 11:37 CDT
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w00t! |
Reviewed By: VagabondKnight On: June 30, 2003 11:37 CDT
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w00t! |
Reviewed By: Sir Telarius [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2003 13:33 CDT
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Thanks for your note, Craig. I am very sorry about the lack of posting. Needless to say, I've been struck with a rather unique strain of writer's block. However, I've gotten back into it after finishing a few reading projects. I should be able to post part 13 within the next month. Then a few more posts to follow after.
Thanks for your interest
Jacob (The Author) |
Reviewed By: VagabondKnight On: June 28, 2003 17:11 CDT
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Hey Telarius!
Dying to know what happens next!
It's been so long since an update here I hope that you haven't decided to quit on it. that would suck. Just when things were looking down for a change ;-) .
pestering incessantly,
-Craig |
Reviewed By: VagabondKnight On: March 14, 2003 18:42 CST
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Great Job with chapter 12 Telarius.
you never cease to entertain.
-The Wayward Vagabond |
Reviewed By: Sir Telarius [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2003 19:08 CST
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Well, you must remember that this thing is really meant to be read like a book. You read a little, you continue on. Not everything needs to be recapped in that situation. In fact, little does. I do understand that, because I do not post terribly often (something I wish to fix), I end up losing some of my readers. Questions are welcome, and all my readers can henceforth reach me with questions at my AIM screenname Sir Telarius or my e-mail address sirtelarius@yahoo.com
I will either answer questions outright, if they are supposed to be known, or like a Vorlon if they are not.
Thanks for your comment, Craig!
Sir Telarius |
Reviewed By: VagabondKnight On: January 09, 2003 11:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nicely done, Telarius.
As always I find your work greatly entertaining.
My only suggestion is in regards to previous plot points. You make referance to things that I have forgotten in the month since your last update. So I feel the need to re read old chapters, not a unenjoyable task mind you. Heh, Far from it!
Sometimes a little redundancy in writing is needed. A light touch of recap to invoke some memories of what transpired before.
You still have that talent with the hook, my friend. It inspires a desparate urge to know what happens next.
Write On!
-Craig |
Reviewed By: Sir Telarius [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2003 20:56 CST
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Sorry that this one took so long. It was a lot of work, believe it or not. The toughest section yet. |
Reviewed By: Phoenix Element [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2002 23:51 CST
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*grins and gives you a big hug* The best chapter yet, methinks!! It's really good stuff ^_^ ....but when do we get more? ^_~ |
Reviewed By: VagabondKnight On: October 27, 2002 16:32 CST
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Great job! I've been waiting to see what you were going to do with the first challenge.
I love how you end the chapter, with a hook that digs right into my curiousity.
Can't wait to see what happens next.
-Craig |
Reviewed By: Phoenix Element [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2002 22:24 CDT
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Great stuff, love! Y'know I love your style - both writing and otherwise. I loved how you described the mechanics of a spell. Sorta gives the more scientifically-minded a better chance to accept magick too, eh? Hehe, is this gonna turn out to be like Catcher in the Rye, where you find out at the end that Holden's talking to a shrink? Did Telarius get commited? Oo |
Reviewed By: ^SunDial^ [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2002 15:16 CDT
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I love your work it's great! Im starting to also write a story based off of yours its so GREAT!
Dial* |
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