Reviewed By: Dolphin_26 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2011 18:07 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Overall, the style of writing is really good; the entire story flows together. Every now and then,though, there was a slight stumbline block that caused me go back and reread the sentence(s) a few times. There was one tiny spelling mistake at the beginning about six lines down. There were also several places where some extra punctuation could have been added. I laughed quite a bit will reading your story, and you definitely succeeded with getting an awwwww at the end. I really enjoyed reading your story. |
