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| "Reality's Illusion" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] | Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2009 03:22 CDT
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Hmmm, updates might be sparse, but it;s still cool to see you updating this story. I should be posting the first two chapters (prologue and first chapter) for my own Naruto fanfic in the next week, hope you'll take a look (my other piece is abandoned, unfortunate really). Anyway, Naruto staring at Naruto is pretty awesome, if a bit freaky, but commenting on yourself? Pretty funny. Anyway, I need SOME sleep tonight, so keep writing, and update soon, neh? Ja ne.
| Title: Yippee Ki-yay, mother fucker
Reviewed By: GoblinKing2112 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2009 00:36 CDT
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Finger-tip brain fry no jutsu? SWEET! Hm... Shitsumei is starting to catch up to Jaime Hyneman in the expressiveness department, But his personality still lags behind. I get the feeling that something creepy, disturbing, absurd, and awesome is going to happen. And I mean all four of those at the same time. Chapter 4 seemed shorter than the others... DAMN YOU WRITER'S BLOCK! DAMN YOU TO THE WASTE BASKET OF BLOODY TAMPONS THAT IS SATANS BREAKFAST! ::blinks for exactly .02 seconds before his head implodes and is replaced with a doll of Vivi Ornitier from FFIX:: Please, more aswesomeness! He rarely let's me out of his desk. ::places Vivi doll on desk, leaning against speaker:: That was wierd ::head pops out of nowhere:: Oh well, keep up the good work. And if I confused you, then you are in the same boat as me as I rarely know what the hell I am saying or doing. Ja ne. The Goliath's Commandment - Our name is Goliath, and we are Legion!
| Reviewed By: RasalynnLynx On: April 28, 2009 16:51 CDT
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Really neat. I like how things are progressing. Can't wait to see how things turn out. Update soon.
| Title: Shock and Awe
Reviewed By: GoblinKing2112 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2009 01:21 CDT
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::jaw drops in astonishment:: Oh... My... God... Yo-you mentioned... me? ::twitches as he freaks out out of shear incredulity:: Even Jumper Jacket didn't speak of me in Eyes Piercing the Dark (he sent me emails in reply to my reviews and used a few things from them). So the fact that anyone would speak of me in public astounds me, and garners my deepest appreciation.. and a salute from a guy with a flaming lawnmower blade and a woman wearing the severed hand of a miniature tarrasque like a gauntlet. I-I don't know what to say. I just want to sic a godzilla-sized three-headed wolf upon a group of unsuspecting school girls and laugh as she/he/he treats them like her/his/his pups (two mated werewolves and a shapeshifting canine fused into one form makes for some wierdness; noted from right to left). 5th method: Ben Ten Paradox. If you saw alien force, then you know what I mean. Being shifted outside of time is very traumatic. While the members of the Goliath Empire are outside of time, none of them have actually been physically removed from the timestream (so no time manipulation outside of the limited effects of chronal technology). Also, you raised a certain metaphysical question due to Naruto touching Shitsumei. There is going to be some very fucked up shit happening now, as temporal variants of an entity should never make physical contact, as it can severely distort reality (Uh... why is my heart floating there? And how the hell is it pumping blood through my veins? Why am I floating here? where are my legs? And the ground for that matter?) Reality variants are also troublesome (Jet Li's The One), but dimensional variants practically have no problems (except for inbreeding purposes). No matter. Keep up the good work my man. Ja ne. P.S. I hope you update Failing Twilight soon, but I understand if you have switched focus/priorities. The Goliath's Commandment - When I am angry, I get the urge to reduce a planets population by 95%... at the bare minimum ~ Hanicas on seeing people try to lynch an orphan at a carnival; In accordance with Statute seventy-two, Subsection thirteen, Paragraph four of the Auschwitz Act: If you do not except these terms I will be legally required to destroy EVERYTHING within a 5000 mile radius. In accordance with Statute one, Subsection one, Paragraph one of the Spiral Maelstrom Act: I am legally permitted to ANNIHILATE EVERYTHING within a four-hundred-thousand light-year radius. And to tell you the truth… there isn't anything within four-hundred-thousand light-years that I consider worth keeping ~ Hanicas on learning that said lynched boy was raped. He says this while stripping the flesh from a rapist and eating it, quite loudly I might add; Sever his spine, he has no need for movement Yeah, I kill stupid fucks all the time. That's why the Fallout series is so fun.
| Title: Rabid Flesheating Panties takeover Montana, nominated for Nobel Peace Prize
Reviewed By: GoblinKing2112 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2009 21:21 CST
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Hmm... I have access to most of the Rifts books from Palladium books, so I shall take a crack at guessing the nature of his predicament. There are multiple possibilities left open for time-travel, but I shall stick with ones that can be unintentional. 1st Method: Time-Travel via Dimensional Jaunt. This form of Time Travel is much more closely related to Dimensional Travel and Reality Hopping, but is still viable and the specific dimension/plane/realm can influence unusual events. If using D&D, he likely came from Minethys, Third layer of the Tarterian Depths of Carceri, Which consists of an infinite number of Desert Worlds (3rd/3.5). Another possibility from D&D is the Temporal Energy Plane (especially 2nd edition). 2nd Method: Dimensional Gateways/Distortions. The best example would be literature on the Bermuda and other Devil/Dragon Triangles, displacing time and space with unusual events during transit. Better understanding in Rifts though, especially World Book 2: Atlantis. 3rd Method: Time/History Repetition. This is based on the concept of time/history repeating itself. Unlikely really, since exact duplications are near impossible and it requires reincarnation. 4th Method: My personal favorite, and the Core of the Goliath Empire, Reality Repetition. Unlikely, but basically Shitsumei lived past the end of his universe and TECHNICALLY is in another universe born from the remnants of his own. This would indicate a physical age possibly beyond comprehension. Even my main character, age ~Googol-Plex + 3 Googols + 23,000,369,462,730 Years, shifts across time so as to get to the next epoch, and has witnessed countless births and deaths of universes, so as to stave off mental deterioration. If any of these are the case, drop me a line at my E-Mail address or Myspace account (both on my profile here). I got time to waste, that's why the Sahara is expanding so quickly. Ja ne. • In the depths of time, I have toiled endlessly, searching for my purpose. I have seen that which cannot be, that which must not be. There are things out there that no mind should comprehend. There are those who believe all things have order, while others believe there is no order. This is but a fallacy created by the ignorant and unimaginative. The Persona non Grata and Cadit quaestio assume that everything is one way. There is no one way. Does not water come as Ice and mist as well as liquid? No, the one truth I have learned is that there is no truth. The Vulcans have dedicated their lives to pure logic, whilst the Slaad revel in Chaos Incarnate. Both stances have merits, but their flaws go far beyond them. I stand upon the precipice between them. I speak the truth, for I revel in my madness. Logic is my Insanity; Insanity is my Logic. ~ Hanicas, Temporal Outsider
| Title: Amnesiac Assault
Reviewed By: GoblinKing2112 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2009 07:06 CST
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Woah... Amnesiac Kage Bunshins running around. Now that would be freaky. This seems to be a good story. But hey, let your creativity flow. make a text/word doc that you put ideas in. Sometimes they may not be appropriate for your current story, but will be good for others. Keep up the good work ::gives a Shitsumei patented blank stare, causing the entire Uchiha clan to twitch in abject fear of losing control of their bowels:: Ja ne. The Goliath's Commandment - Sever his spine, he doesn't need to move
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