Reviewed By: Katrina Kadabra [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2002 16:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is wonderful work! You perfectly captured each character's thoughts and feelings, especially concerning Yui and her memories. (I'm trying to do the same in my own FY fanfic, but I don't know if I'm doing so good a job.) I also like the way you told the same story from both points of view. You should try doing some full-length stories as well, I think they would come out really good. |
