Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2009 03:38 CST Comment/Review: interesting first, well written. one thing though-- line breaks-- the mediaminer monster has a taste for them. if you don't put extra spaces between paragraphs, they don't show up when you post. so, next story (one hopes there will be many more) please take extra precaution. ♣ thank you, ginny ♥
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