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| "Reality" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] | Reviewed By: Ishellmay [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2009 19:30 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't believe in pro-choice. I believe in murder because that's all abortion is. I was almost the victim of abortion but my mother chose to keep me. You've told my story. Thank you.
| Reviewed By: MontyCello [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2009 18:27 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
The only reason it's not a 10 is for some bothersome areas where quotation marks seem to be misused (I don't know if that's just the way you write or what, my Proper English Language is bothered by what seems unnecessary), and some awkward areas where I can't tell who's doing what because there's too many "she"s. Otherwise, the story is excellent and enjoyable. You fit it in as a fanfiction, even though it's a simple AU. And even though I can tell you're trying to get a point across, it melded in with the story to seem totally believable. I wouldn't have known you had an intention had you not mentioned it!
| Reviewed By: Knittingknots [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2009 18:18 CDT
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This piece has been nominated at the Feudal Association! Founded in 2005 by author/artist, Dark Avenger, and currently owned by authors/artist, Inuyashaloverr and KnittingKnots, the Feudal Association consists of writers, artists, and enthusiasts of the InuYasha fandom. But aside from that, we are also proud to say that we are an awards guild that recognizes fan-fiction and artwork. Several times a year we nominate, vote, and hand out honors to some of the best creations in the fandom. Our official website can be found here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/ The current nominations pages are here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/nommedfics.html (Fiction) http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/nommedart.html (Fanart) Check them out to see what you were nominated for! Our Yahoo Group, where the nominations and voting occurs, can be found here: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group! ~ Inuyashaloverr & KnittingKnots Owners/Administrators of the Feudal Association ***Please Note: You may receive this notice more than once if you've been nominated for several awards. They will appear as reviews on your nominated works.
| Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2009 14:50 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Beautiful. I'm pro-choice but I love how you presented this story. You managed to touch on a really sensitive topic whithought forcing in a personal bias. Kagome's thoughts and descisions...it was all so realistic. And the ending was sweet. I really, really liked this :) ~Amber
| Reviewed By: wudelfin [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2009 11:22 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
quite beautiful, gentle prodding I see. interesting
| Reviewed By: Kawa-Misuterii [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2009 21:50 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I gotta say, despite the fact that I am Pro-choice and always will be, I really appreciated this story.
| Reviewed By: arwilliam On: February 14, 2009 13:27 CST
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thank you i was thinking about not having my child but i.. just thanks
| Reviewed By: Silly1 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2009 10:22 CST
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You know, I started out reading this prepared for the worst but willing to accept it, no matter that the subject matter bothered me. It is a reality in today's world, and I was interested in how you would present this in terms of Kagome & Inuyasha. The ending is just great, and is a powerful statement all by itself, even without your author's comment afterward. Stories like this might just reach more people than strict moralizing would. It's such a highly personal decision, and you handled the subject matter very well. I liked the story.
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