| "Try My Life!" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: rubytwili18 On: December 21, 2011 01:10 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was verrrry good, great in fact! There were a few sentences that were quite confusing when Gloria and Kurama were switched and Kamine suddenly coming in as a warrior or something was a little random, but apart from that it was very well written :) |
Reviewed By: FreeMindedOnes [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2009 20:43 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome! You wrote more! I was LMAO with this one!!! Major props! Keep it up!
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Title: :D
Reviewed By: Zircrubyon [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2009 03:55 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LMAO! I loved it! Beautifully written. Hahas I alost gagged wen she had to go to the bathroom tho. x]. Guys don't sit when they go[#1], unforunately for her. Awws. Perfect story. Best one shot/short story I've read in like... Iono maybe a year xDD.
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