| "A Game of Poker" Reviews/Comments [ 23 ] |
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Reviewed By: iiZeeEpic On: September 28, 2009 03:38 EDT
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its me again :D thank god you updated @________o; i have been checking in constantly. thank you bookman for giving lavi some more time with tyki =DD great job :3 cant wait for more xoxoxoxoxo
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Reviewed By: newest fan(: On: September 11, 2009 17:38 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
amazing.i just adore your writing.your characters are so realistic.i couldn't stop reading til i finished.you write so beautifully.makes me tear haha.i definitely think you should have more reviews.i can't wait to know what happens pleaase update(:
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Reviewed By: iiZeeEpic On: August 30, 2009 00:46 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
DX i wish you would update -dying- sorry i havnt been writing reviews o.o; -story stalker- i adore allen ;3; is his relationship with the cranky japanese going to go far ? :D XDD -wants to find out- fantastic story :3 i love the conflict as much as i want it solved :] some people just make lovey at the start fics that make me sick v~v life doesnt work like that DX and it gets borning X3 xoxoxoxoxo
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Reviewed By: Nameless13 On: May 29, 2009 18:48 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I like your style of writing and I love the pairing!
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Reviewed By: Atsil [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2009 02:39 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah, this came out faster than I was expecting. *former lurker* (I think I've been reading this since....5~6 chapters ago? Something like that...) I wanted to say I love this. Thanks to you I'm an official Lucky fan. xD I haven't found any doujin yet though... Oh well~. I think my favorite part in this is the way you show emotional growth. No matter how far they've gone in their relationship, I still don't get any OCC-ness from them. Your style is also pretty eye-catching. Me likes. xD But the best thing over all is that I'm almost never able to predict what will happen properly. >.< I want to know~~. Gah, I'm feeling inspired. *wants to write* Good luck with your muses as well!^-^
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Reviewed By: dimonyo-anghel [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2009 14:50 EDT
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I love the emotions Lavi makes Tyki feel and vice versa! I wonder what would happen if anyone did find out about their little affair... Poor Lavi
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Reviewed By: dimonyo-anghel [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2009 16:52 EDT
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awww I loved this chapter 4!! I hope Lavi and Tyki end up somewhat happy at least ! Thanks for the update!
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Reviewed By: dimonyo-anghel [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2009 02:31 EST
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GAH!! I love this!! I can't wait to read more! I hope Lavi ends up happy in this story... =D
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