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Reviewed By: Dai-kun On: March 19, 2011 12:04 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to say I enjoyed this piece, especially since it's difficult to find well written D. Grey Man fanfiction that is Lavi-centric. I would like to maybe point out that you use plenty of pronouns in sequence repetitively. (she said... she said... the earl... the earl... the earl... etc) I would suggest maybe changing these around so that you don't have so many sentences in close proximity that start the same way. That was really my only concern--hopefully you don't hate me for saying it. Otherwise, this was deliciously amazing and I tip my hat to you--not that I wear a hat... :) Great job! I look forward to reading more of your work. |
Reviewed By: fustilugs3 On: March 06, 2011 11:51 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've read a lot of fanfic in my day, but I have to say this story is now on my list of top 5 all time favorite fanfics. The characters are so well-written, and the story-line is so engaging. It's like getting a new season of DGM, but with (really hot) boy sex! :D Please keep writting, you are extremely talented! |
Reviewed By: Stephanie1339 On: August 14, 2010 17:53 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've really enjoyed your story so far. I started to read it on a whim, even though I haven't read D. Gray-man. After reading this, I will be watching it as soon as possible. Thank you for a *good* story.
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Title: LOVE IT!!!
Reviewed By: Aki57 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2010 14:12 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story and style and your characters are very well-written!!! PLEASE DO CONTINUE~Can't wait for the next chapter!!!! I really want to know what happened!!!! keep up your good work, looking forward to reading more of your stories :)
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Reviewed By: iiZeeEpic On: May 20, 2010 23:17 EDT
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FINALLY ! D: i checked every day when the fic was late :c you usually update once a month. it was worth the wait though. whats going to happen to lavi -tries to think of all the possibilities-
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Reviewed By: iiZeeEpic On: March 26, 2010 01:18 EDT
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you never cease to amaze me :3
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Reviewed By: Jewelbrat2 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2010 22:34 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story! I laughed, I cried... this is a very good story. I'm really glad that Lenalee didn't break under the pressure of the illusion. That would have pissed me off. she's strong. I like that Komui freed Tyki from his room. I'm glad Allen/Kanda forced its way into your story line. I'm a fan of that pairing but wasn't looking for it specifically in this story. What an awesome surprise!!! YOU ROCK! I am totally on the edge of my seat wanting to know what happens. It's kind of depressing to know there aren't like, 10 more chapters waiting for me to read. But that's just me being impatient. Update soon and make us all happy!
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Reviewed By: KetsuekiTenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2009 14:41 EST
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Oh my gosh! This chapter was so good! Thank you so much for updating so soon. And I will most definitely keep my eyes open for the new Lucky fic. =^.^= Thank you, thank you, thank you!
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Reviewed By: iiZeeEpic On: November 24, 2009 02:09 EST
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ciaossu :] 's me again. im so glad you updated !! D: tyki dont kill lavi !
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Reviewed By: KetsuekiTenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2009 08:14 EST
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Whoo-hoo! Yet another amazing chapter! But poor Lavi...I really thought he was going to cry. Thank you for the update, and please put another one up soon!
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Reviewed By: kyo shu On: November 04, 2009 17:19 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've been reading your stories for the past few days and I've got to say, I absolutely love all of them. Your style of writing is really wonderful, and I love the progression of this story so much. Please continue to update please. All of your fics really make my day! Thanx.
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Reviewed By: Isanne On: November 02, 2009 11:14 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your work, you bring Tyki and Lavi alive!
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Reviewed By: KetsuekiTenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2009 11:30 EDT
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Holy crap! More Yullen has surfaced...*drools* Thanks you so much for not taking this amazing story off, and thank you thank you thank you for updating so soon! This chapter was suprising, as I wasn't expecting a focus on anyone other than Tyki and Lavi, but I thoroughly enjoyed it! Keep up the wonderful writing, and I'll keep an eye out for your next update!
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Title: Thank you!
Reviewed By: KetsuekiTenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2009 12:20 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story amazes me. As soon as I was reading the first chapter, I had a feeling that this would become one of my favorite stories, and it most definitely has! I love the take that you give on these characters, and you write them so well it almost seems as though they are yours. I adore the TykiXLavi paring, and I was estatic when you snuck a little hint of Yullen in there. =^_^= Your writing style is so wonderfully detailed and descriptive, and it just gets better with every chapter that you post. Thank you so much for posting your story on so many sites to give us readers our pick of where to read it!(fanfiction.net always seems to mess up my computer. =TT.TT=) On a side note-I do apologize for not reviewing before this. Typically I just don't have the extra time to use on reviewing since I'm always busy...But I will most definitely be reviewing every chapter from now on! Thank you, thank you, thank you!
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Title: Wow!
Reviewed By: Angel Fantasy [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2009 13:53 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Is it me, or is Kanda starting to act a little like Wrath? Uncontrollable anger, sudden urge for sweets even through he doesn't like them... The facts are adding up. Tbh, I hope he won't. He's already one heck of an ouragan in the order, no need to add fuel to his inner fire, hmm?
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