| "A Game of Poker" Reviews/Comments [ 23 ] |
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Reviewed By: iiZeeEpic On: November 24, 2009 02:09 EST
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ciaossu :] 's me again. im so glad you updated !! D: tyki dont kill lavi !
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Reviewed By: KetsuekiTenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2009 08:14 EST
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Whoo-hoo! Yet another amazing chapter! But poor Lavi...I really thought he was going to cry. Thank you for the update, and please put another one up soon!
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Reviewed By: kyo shu On: November 04, 2009 17:19 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've been reading your stories for the past few days and I've got to say, I absolutely love all of them. Your style of writing is really wonderful, and I love the progression of this story so much. Please continue to update please. All of your fics really make my day! Thanx.
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Reviewed By: Isanne On: November 02, 2009 11:14 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your work, you bring Tyki and Lavi alive!
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Reviewed By: KetsuekiTenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2009 11:30 EDT
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Holy crap! More Yullen has surfaced...*drools* Thanks you so much for not taking this amazing story off, and thank you thank you thank you for updating so soon! This chapter was suprising, as I wasn't expecting a focus on anyone other than Tyki and Lavi, but I thoroughly enjoyed it! Keep up the wonderful writing, and I'll keep an eye out for your next update!
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Title: Thank you!
Reviewed By: KetsuekiTenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2009 12:20 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story amazes me. As soon as I was reading the first chapter, I had a feeling that this would become one of my favorite stories, and it most definitely has! I love the take that you give on these characters, and you write them so well it almost seems as though they are yours. I adore the TykiXLavi paring, and I was estatic when you snuck a little hint of Yullen in there. =^_^= Your writing style is so wonderfully detailed and descriptive, and it just gets better with every chapter that you post. Thank you so much for posting your story on so many sites to give us readers our pick of where to read it!(fanfiction.net always seems to mess up my computer. =TT.TT=) On a side note-I do apologize for not reviewing before this. Typically I just don't have the extra time to use on reviewing since I'm always busy...But I will most definitely be reviewing every chapter from now on! Thank you, thank you, thank you!
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Title: Wow!
Reviewed By: Angel Fantasy [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2009 13:53 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Is it me, or is Kanda starting to act a little like Wrath? Uncontrollable anger, sudden urge for sweets even through he doesn't like them... The facts are adding up. Tbh, I hope he won't. He's already one heck of an ouragan in the order, no need to add fuel to his inner fire, hmm?
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Reviewed By: iiZeeEpic On: September 28, 2009 03:38 EDT
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its me again :D thank god you updated @________o; i have been checking in constantly. thank you bookman for giving lavi some more time with tyki =DD great job :3 cant wait for more xoxoxoxoxo
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Reviewed By: newest fan(: On: September 11, 2009 17:38 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
amazing.i just adore your writing.your characters are so realistic.i couldn't stop reading til i finished.you write so beautifully.makes me tear haha.i definitely think you should have more reviews.i can't wait to know what happens pleaase update(:
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Reviewed By: iiZeeEpic On: August 30, 2009 00:46 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
DX i wish you would update -dying- sorry i havnt been writing reviews o.o; -story stalker- i adore allen ;3; is his relationship with the cranky japanese going to go far ? :D XDD -wants to find out- fantastic story :3 i love the conflict as much as i want it solved :] some people just make lovey at the start fics that make me sick v~v life doesnt work like that DX and it gets borning X3 xoxoxoxoxo
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Title: Roaming Reviewer
Reviewed By: Nameless13 On: May 29, 2009 18:48 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I like your style of writing and I love the pairing!
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Reviewed By: Atsil [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2009 02:39 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah, this came out faster than I was expecting. *former lurker* (I think I've been reading this since....5~6 chapters ago? Something like that...) I wanted to say I love this. Thanks to you I'm an official Lucky fan. xD I haven't found any doujin yet though... Oh well~. I think my favorite part in this is the way you show emotional growth. No matter how far they've gone in their relationship, I still don't get any OCC-ness from them. Your style is also pretty eye-catching. Me likes. xD But the best thing over all is that I'm almost never able to predict what will happen properly. >.< I want to know~~. Gah, I'm feeling inspired. *wants to write* Good luck with your muses as well!^-^
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Reviewed By: dimonyo-anghel [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2009 14:50 EDT
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I love the emotions Lavi makes Tyki feel and vice versa! I wonder what would happen if anyone did find out about their little affair... Poor Lavi
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Reviewed By: dimonyo-anghel [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2009 16:52 EDT
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awww I loved this chapter 4!! I hope Lavi and Tyki end up somewhat happy at least ! Thanks for the update!
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Reviewed By: dimonyo-anghel [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2009 02:31 EST
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GAH!! I love this!! I can't wait to read more! I hope Lavi ends up happy in this story... =D
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