| "Safety in Deadly Arms" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: loretta On: May 25, 2009 22:39 CDT
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ok, but could you please post your info for fanfiction .net so we'll know how to find your stories?
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Reviewed By: DemonandGoddess4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2009 00:23 CDT
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I love your story! I was surprised when I got an email saying that you updated. I very excited that your going to change it in to a story! Poor Inuyasha to stumble across them at such a time..=]
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Reviewed By: house bunny On: April 15, 2009 12:01 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The story is great please update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2009 17:05 CDT
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poor inuyasha, i'm sure that was emotionally scarring
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2009 03:09 CDT
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this was great, i hope you decide to make it more than a oneshot. how does inuyasha react to what happened? does kagome biting sess cause any problems? why hasnt the well closed, i know you said kagome still has things left to do but what is it?
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Reviewed By: kjpan On: March 24, 2009 13:48 CDT
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i keep telling you. u can't keep ur stories one shots. come on, i wanna know, inuyasha's reaction. the aftermath. come n!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: Safety in deadly arms
Reviewed By: Teresa Daniel On: March 15, 2009 12:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked the story and i think you should turn it into a chapter story .You did a good job with the lemon also...Keep up the good work and i hope you turn this into a chapter story.
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Reviewed By: mikoyami [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2009 18:50 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yes it would be funny if she accidently marked him and you would be able to continue the story line i think you should there is a good base so it will end up a great story...keep up the good work...
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Reviewed By: LadyNorth76 On: March 01, 2009 02:16 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, you should definitely continue this story.^^ I love it. It was great and your lemon was good for someone that claims to not have written that many.^^ You're good. I hope to see more chapters. Thanks.
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Reviewed By: wudelfin [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2009 19:18 CST
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just an idea, but what if she marked him...now that's funny a miko claiming the diayouki *snicker*
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