| "The Heirs Apparent" Reviews/Comments [ 28 ] |
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Reviewed By: Invite On: May 09, 2010 07:55 CDT
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My favourite fanfiction series by far! You are a fabulous and fantastic writer!
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Reviewed By: Harmony Sunsinger [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2009 14:56 CST
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i honestly hafta say that Jouichi was always one of my favorite characters, and I really loved the insight that you gave us into his past with Chikara. I love that he was basically a little whore, and very much like a normal teenage boy. Update soon, please!
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Reviewed By: Harmony Sunsinger [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2009 01:23 CST
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Seriously, this is getting crazy (*snort* like it wasn't already, lol) Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Harmony Sunsinger [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2009 11:20 CST
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omg, KILLHIM!!! Naraku better go medieval on his ass! I would! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! And Soren! Ohman, I LIKED him! Tell me he's not dead!
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Reviewed By: Harmony Sunsinger [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2009 20:57 CST
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Wow! Keep going, keep going! It's getting SO good! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Harmony Sunsinger [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2009 02:35 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! Of course, want more, yada yada... XD
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Reviewed By: Harmony Sunsinger [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2009 02:25 CDT
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Oh, wow. My heart hurt so badly in I am the Moon when you killed off the little ones, and now it's all over again! Yikes! What a good way to turn everything around, though; Raganos kills the babies, which pisses of Lei and makes him try to find another way through this war. Things are going totally crazy in your story, and I am loving every word of it.
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Reviewed By: mortalshadow [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2009 12:13 CDT
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I love it! You brought Anupu back.I couldn't stop laughing at Asuna calling him an Ass clown though,you have a good sense of humour :)
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Title: ah shit!
Reviewed By: erinnight [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2009 02:10 CDT
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Holy hell! Not Iyo! She was one of the good ones! But at least now we get to see Ulquiorra tear up some Shouten! Hells to the yes!
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Title: ooh!
Reviewed By: KizzyKitty [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2009 02:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is getting really exciting! I can't wait to find out what Asuna does to the shouten! Hehe i'm all giddy thinking about it! Your Biggest Fan Kiz
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Title: DAMN!
Reviewed By: Harmony Sunsinger [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2009 00:48 CDT
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These boys are gonna all end up killing each other! And themselves! Holy Hell; EXCELLENT job, chika. This is AMAZING!
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Reviewed By: erinnight [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2009 13:09 CDT
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Yay! Akemi's back! What happened to her? Did the Yamaneko and the Dragons get into a huge war and decimate each other or something? That's what it looks like. And what happened to Grimmjoww to make him an Arrancar? I'm thinking that he died defending Asuna or something along those lines. Ok, just update soon, Kay?
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Title: XD
Reviewed By: KizzyKitty [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2009 01:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was a very good chapter! Thank you again for the awesome fic. Your Biggest Fan Kiz
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Reviewed By: Mortal shadow On: July 22, 2009 16:07 CDT
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You said to let u know who to include in the fic so here it is,I wondered what happened with Gemming and Changming.I also figure Kaito would be extremely powerful by now and since his A-Hole brother is dead he could come back from exile to help with the wraith problem.Anupu would also be massively powerful if he's still alive.It's good to hear you're going to let Sess be his old deadly self after all he doesnt have his name for nothing.Naraku and Ishin should be even more lethal now since they've lived so long I say let them show their old dangerous selves too.The longer the story the better :)
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Reviewed By: erinnight [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2009 16:32 CDT
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I've been wondering about Akemi! Where did she and the dragons go? Why hasn't she been in this so far? She and Asuna used to be so close... I'm very glad that you're bringing her back. She was probably my favorite character, besides Ishin and Tekeshi. Such sweet boys... Oh, and Shezmu too! Haha, update soon!
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