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| "A Restless Night's Dream" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] | Reviewed By: GhostReader [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2009 00:48 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a very interesting story. I wasn't sure what to expect from it at first, but i really like it. Update soon :)
| Title: A restless nights dream
Reviewed By: Teresa Daniel On: March 14, 2009 05:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
i thought the story was a good start. this particular type plot has not been done to daeth like some plot type stories.I think you should turn it into a kag/sess story with some jealous fights between sess/inu/and kouga over kags and who will be come her mate.Possibly add some fights with 2 or 3 other youkai bitch wanting to fight kags for the right to mate sess after sess wins the right to mate kags over inu and kouga. But make kags a strong fighter with hidden training and talents that no one knows about that she has been learning into her time and with her miko powers training under several strong miko in the past when they think she is at home. This draws sess to notice her as he starts to fall in love with her. But sess and kags dont want hanyou pups because they didnt want there pups to have to go through life the way inuyasha did struggling to survive daily. So he tells kags if they both mark each other while mating on the night of a full moon and drink each others blood she will become a miko inuyoukai.She will retain her miko power because she is a high power miko and ,the true guardian protector of the shikon o and tama.Kagome finds out from kaede that she is the only living decendant of Midoriko. A pureheart miko like midoriko was after kagome shows her a shikon symbol with a tiny heart that had appeared on kagome forehead while she was at home.She has been trying to keep the symbol hidden from everyone since it appeared only songo and shippo know about it and now kaede because she wanted to know what it meant . This is the reason she has been trainging in secret with all these other mikos that kaede has been sending her to. inu/kouga and sess think she is at home in her time for school,tests,and visiting with relatives.But she has been sneaking back through the well where sango meets her to take her to train with these other mikos for a week at a time.Because kagome is a pureheart miko she has a lots of new skills to train and master before she mates with sess.Some of these skills could be potionmaking,spell casting and making her own spells,making different types of barriers,learning to make things grow and learnig to heal all injuries,using her seers ability,making different types of orbs of power to throw at enemies. She needs to master all her new skills to defeat those other bitches when she is challenged.So she visits totousai the swordmaker to have some new weapons made special for a miko with demon power. She gets a sword, bow that needs no arrows that never misses its target,chopstix for her hair and a few other hair accessories that all turn into weapons,and armour, boots and outfit special made by totousai that never needs cleaning cause her miko power purifies it clean.also write about the lives of sess,kags and the gang and what happens in there life after kags mated sess.
| Reviewed By: Elven_mistress [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2009 20:26 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked it, I hope you continue. I've always been a sucker for Sess/Kag pairings.
| Reviewed By: cassandralynn30 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2009 09:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Yes, I think you should continue.. I mean what if it really wasn't a dream and he was there and took off before she woke.
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