| "Passion Fruit" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Title: omg!!
Reviewed By: inugomelover [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2010 18:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
omg omg omg!! now the reasom y i didnt give an enjoyment and overall rateing is b/c theres not a high enough number!!! so id say both of them are either 12 or 13. that was amazing and i loved to read it!!! one question- did hojo really not know what would happen or was he playing dumb to do what inuyasha said he was? (=^__^=)
|
Reviewed By: Merry-Stalker On: March 13, 2009 10:37 CDT
Comment/Review:
there are alot of grammatical errors... and its kinda poorly written... but keep trying, youll get better... eventually...
|
Reviewed By: braindrain217 On: March 11, 2009 19:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Holy crap was that hot. You write very passionately and it was very exciting and interesting. Thanks Please write more.
|
Reviewed By: Lunabell [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2009 01:57 CST
Comment/Review:
By the way Karaumea you SOUND like miroku....O_O
|
Reviewed By: Lunabell [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2009 01:54 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay I want some of that fruit too!
|
Reviewed By: Karaumea [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2009 09:48 CST
Comment/Review:
Ahem... Do you happen to know where I can find that fruit? :)
|
Title: 0_0 Wow
Reviewed By: MikoPrincess16 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2009 12:14 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow that was some powerful fruit! Just imagine if Miroku got a hold of it! 0_0 Now that's scary lol!
|
Title: HOT DAMN!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Hakudoshi's gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2009 02:05 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HOT DAMN!!!! What kond of fruit was that?! Why you stop?!?!?! Keep going!!!
|
Title: O_O
Reviewed By: Lunabell [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2009 23:36 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What the hell kind of fruit was THAT?! O_O
|
