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Reviewed By: astrakage [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2010 09:02 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this and I can't wait for more! I wonder if it was Onigumo who was the one who put the collar on Sesshoumaru?
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Reviewed By: kale [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2010 23:15 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Liking the story. Is this going to be yaoi or simply a brother fic? You could really go both ways with it. I found the charm on Inuyasha kinda interesting, I haven't seen him turn into a less powerful demon before. Most stories have him evolving into a full demon or a more powerful one. I found the format kind hard to read. In the first few chapters it is very hard to determine what is dialoge. Also you might consider a beta to edit the first few chapters. Looking for to the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: LoveINUCEST On: March 26, 2010 09:20 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a fantastic fiction story. However, you need to watch grammar and spelling errors. It kind of distracts a person when they are reading. Otherwise, this is a really good piece of fiction and keep up the good work!!!
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Reviewed By: anf600 (Toni) On: March 25, 2010 18:44 PDT
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awwww that was sweet...and boy I understand babies and sleep deprivation. When they sleep YOU sleep
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Reviewed By: VegoSacomoto [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2009 19:25 PST
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What a turn of events. Sesshoumaru meet the old Noraku.... If hes the one incontrol of Sesshoumaru kill him soon. Sesshoumaru is not to be controll!!!!!!!!!!!!!! lol. oh i read that stort but my dum self for got to add it as one of my faves. -_-' but ill do that now. i love that story.up date soon
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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2009 06:02 PST
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Oh shit! Did Onigumo put the subjugation necklace on Sesshoumaru? This is very intriguing. ^_^
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Reviewed By: Inumimi [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2009 10:22 PDT
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Cliffhanger!!! I hate them! Please update soon, must know what InuYasha has been hiding.
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Reviewed By: anf600 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2009 21:46 PDT
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This is interesting and you have a cliffhanger there - I really want to know what Inuyasha 'looks' like....you have my curiousity roused. Please keep it up.
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Reviewed By: VegoSacomoto [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2009 20:52 PDT
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Ok yust to let you know at the begining it sound like you where bracking up with sesshoumaru's mother thoght that was funny. I agree with you i don't like when they turn Inuyasha to a gril i stop reading after that. but it macks me curouse about what Inyasha looks like so update soon
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Reviewed By: Saiba Wolf On: October 03, 2009 15:42 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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Beautiful story. You're building a very interesting and diverse world. Even if I don't remember to review know you'll have a dedicated reader in me!
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Reviewed By: VegoSacomoto [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2009 21:24 PDT
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sorry but i cant help you with the m.m thing wish i could it would mack your story easier to read for beople like me with bad eyes. but i love the story ether way its qickly becomeing very intresting. chibi sesshoumaru was soo cute and im shore ur nefew is too. i cant wait to see more about there past and see what else will happen in the present. update soon and ill keep reading.
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Reviewed By: Inumimi [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2009 12:12 PDT
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I love little Sess he is so cute! I assume Kagome, Sango & Miroku are all going to learn everything about the Inu brother's past (as will we). Please keep going (luckily the odd g & h problem seems to be restricted to chapter 2)!
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Reviewed By: VegoSacomoto [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2009 13:53 PDT
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I love it so far. I am a little confused though. so is Everyone going to see Sesshomarus memaries? I can't wait to find out what happens.
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Reviewed By: Inumimi [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2009 13:07 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The story is very good and I am very happy that you will finish it (I really want to know what Inu is up to). The only thing that was odd was that there were lots of the letters g & h tossed in all over the place. Lots of the quotation marks were missing and also replaced by the letters g & h so the story was a little hard to read (that's why I could only give you a 6 for Spelling & Grammar - Sorry). Please keep writing, I will keep reading!
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Reviewed By: my_perversities On: March 02, 2009 22:09 PST
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OH MY!! Totally continue. Although I must ask...is it going to be a Sessh!uke fic cuz I'm kinda hoping not XD. And has Sessh been raped...cuz I might just cry. I can't wait to see where you take this and hope to see more soon...you have my allegience!!!
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