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Reviewed By: Tessa Miryanna On: July 01, 2015 22:56 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think your style of writing is very engaging; while your spelling
and grammar are a little sub par. However, it only subtracted
minimally from my enjoyment of your fic. I'm so impressed with your
originality and creativity on this fanfic. In fact, that's why I'm
writing a review (which I never do). I'm hoping that you'll
micracuously pick it up again, even after so much time. ;) I found
myself greedily reading your entire story in one sitting. I felt
very nervous about your big reveal of Inuyasha as being much
younger than he appears. I found your explanation of how his charm
works a little unbelievable. Even so, I would be interested to see
where you were planning to take that little plot nugget. I
absolutely love your portrayal of the young Sesshomaru. I feel like
you've managed to perfectly convey how a child in his position
might feel. I found myself giggling out loud numerous times while
reading. Your characters are so relatable and cute! While I think
that some of the chapters that portray Sesshomaru and Inuyasha's
younger selves to be a bit too detailed, I trust that it must be
important to later chapters. Overall, I think this is definitely
one of the most unique, fun, and interesting InuyashaxSesshomaru
fics I've read. I really wish that you had completed your work. I
have little hope that you will continue it, but I think I'll check
in again later on- just in case. :) Goodbye and best wishes!
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Reviewed By: Mad Maxx Coyote [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2015 11:07 PDT
Comment/Review:
Interesting...certai n parts seem rather familiar, and I'm not sure
I like, or get, the whole...Inu is a younger kid thing. But...I'll
stick it out for a bit.
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Reviewed By: boneheart [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2014 21:56 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really want chapter 12 this is awesome Plz continue!!! :D
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Reviewed By: happyreader On: June 02, 2012 13:48 PDT
Comment/Review:
I love this story and hope you can finish it because I'm die-ing of curiosity xo |
Reviewed By: AvangelineFierce [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2011 14:07 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello, I just wanted to tell you I enjoyed reading your story, and wish to read more of it in the future, its a nice twist to the usual story between the two brothers. You leave enough questions unanswered to keep people reading while explaining enough we don't get confused or lost. I truly do look forward to more. I wish you plenty of muses and lots of luck in your future writing. |
Reviewed By: ardentes1247 On: February 18, 2011 19:05 PST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
This is a great story! I really enjoyed it! I read the first two chapters on ff.net and then followed your link to this page. I really really enjoyed this story so far and I wish you would write more! I want to know what happens! I was laughing so hard at times that it was hard to breathe. Please update this story! I really love it and want to read more!!! |
Reviewed By: VegoSacomoto [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2010 02:51 PDT
Comment/Review:
Baby InuYasha is so cute. I can't wait to see what happen.
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Reviewed By: misato_1471 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2010 08:09 PDT
Comment/Review:
Aw, what a cute fic! I especially like how inu came to sesshy's defence. Mine indeed! lol.
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Reviewed By: anf600 (Toni) On: September 01, 2010 17:27 PDT
Comment/Review:
awww that was cute!
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Title: Pass the Baby
Reviewed By: MewHanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2010 07:13 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
'Oh my god! Inuyasha just growled at him!!' "Yeah!! You tell him little bro!! Show that bad man who's boss! OH MY GOSH! That was so hilarious. My favorite part.
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Reviewed By: kale25 On: September 01, 2010 02:57 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Mine! You bad. Priceless. Just priceless.
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Reviewed By: Eluwei [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2010 22:06 PDT
Comment/Review:
I tried to read this, I really did. It's sounds so interesting. I just couldn't get around the mistakes in your punctuation. I have no idea why you would use letters instead of the proper punctuation. It made it very confusing and just too difficult to read. And for that I'm sorry because I was looking forward to reading this. I'll check back once in awhile to see if that's been corrected. I would like to read this.
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Reviewed By: VegoSacomoto [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2010 18:27 PDT
Comment/Review:
That imeage of the Inu brothers is so cute.
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Reviewed By: astrakage [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2010 09:02 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this and I can't wait for more! I wonder if it was Onigumo who was the one who put the collar on Sesshoumaru?
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Reviewed By: kale [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2010 23:15 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Liking the story. Is this going to be yaoi or simply a brother fic? You could really go both ways with it. I found the charm on Inuyasha kinda interesting, I haven't seen him turn into a less powerful demon before. Most stories have him evolving into a full demon or a more powerful one. I found the format kind hard to read. In the first few chapters it is very hard to determine what is dialoge. Also you might consider a beta to edit the first few chapters. Looking for to the next chapter.
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