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| "mercinary of the gods" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Title: You are a great author and this is a good story
Reviewed By: Daemonarch71 On: March 05, 2012 07:28 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a great story can you please update this story i would like to know what happens next it just seems to cut off at good part. So please update thanx | Reviewed By: Megatyrant On: February 28, 2011 17:30 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 3 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 3 of 10
Overall Rating: 3 of 10 Comment/Review:
Forgive me if I come across as rude, but have you heard about something called a "comma" as well as a "period? Learn to utilize them, if you want to write a decent story. Otherwise it is kinda hard to read. |
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