Title: wow
Reviewed By: Hikari_Ria [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2009 23:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked how you incorporated unvisited worlds and characters into the story already. especially how the plot is, very unique. the paragraphs are a bit...large though. length wise. when i read the first few paragraphs i had to read them again because i had to make sure i understood them. I'm glad that you did differntiate between who says what but it did get a little confusing. Other than that i would love to know more. please update soon, or you know when you can.
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