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Reviewed By: Piccolosan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2009 07:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OK THAT WAS JUST INSANE HOW GOOD IT WAS!!! Please write another story Brolli/Kakarot. I worship you you wrote the story like I would write it. AMAZING PLEASE PLEASE WRITE ANOTHER ONE.
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Reviewed By: Orchideater [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2009 01:11 CDT
Comment/Review:
This was such a brutal fic, but I feel you did a great job with it. The story fit perfectly into the movie. Vegeta here was at his most unreformed, and he paid for his dark indulgences and learned a harsh lesson in the end. Your Brolli was well-characterized, and I could understand his pain and the reasoning behind his twisted rampaging with this fleshing out of the story. Hard to read at times because of the rape and brutality, but a well-done fic.
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Reviewed By: J. Mikoni [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2009 10:39 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
'...It was beautiful…a painting...a sculpture." He looked Vegeta in the eye with a terrifying smile. "I'm an artist - death is my palette."' Oh sweet joygasm... I melt every time I read that line. Heavens, if I could give this hot piece of sex an 11 out of 10, I would, damn it!
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Reviewed By: J. Mikoni [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2009 10:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Oh my gods, I remember this story from elsewhere. And the reasons for Brolli's going nuts here makes much more sense than in the movie. Not to mention, I love how in character Paragus is :wink:. Awesome as ever!
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